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1、基础写作指导Howtopolishyourcomposition?基础写作提升训练基础写作要求：1.用5个规范的句子描述所给信息的全部内容2.注意句子的连贯性解读高考满分作文高考阅卷场专家评分满分作文满分作文TheChinesegovernmenthasrecentlylaunchedanationwidebanonsmokinginpublic,whichwillcomeintoeffectonJanuary1st,2011.Aimingatbanningsmokinginallindoorpubliclocations
2、,thegovernmentisgoingtoputupnosmokingsignsinsuchplaces.Amongtheroughly350millionsmoker,malesaccountfor75%,whilefemalestakeup25%.Moreover,about540millionpeoplearebeingnegativelyinfluencedbysecond-handsmoke.Andmorethan10thousandpeoplelosetheirlivesowingtosecond-hand
3、smokeeveryyear,whichindicatesthegreatneedtobringthebanintoforce.小结：高分作文写作借鉴1.字体工整漂亮2.要点齐全，完全或几乎没有表达错误3.高级句子表达4.行文连贯Howtopolishyourcomposition?怎样写好句子？怎样使文章连贯？Summary1.正确运用同位语。2.正确运用短语。（with+宾+宾补，非谓语动词短语，高级词汇）5.正确运用连接词。3.正确运用复合句。4.适当地运用一些特殊句式。Howtopolishyourcomposit
4、ion?①Kateisanewstudentfromanorthernprovince.②Shespeaksadialect.③Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.Kate,anewstudentfromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.用一句话表达正确运用同位语。(介绍人物/事物/地点等）人物写作：职位头衔：用同位语,年龄性别与家境也可用同位语SunShuweiisaboyof14fromGuangdo
5、ng。SunShuweiisaworldchampionindiving(一位跳水的世界冠军)。合并：SunShuwei,aworldchampionindiving(一位跳水的世界冠军),isaboyof14fromGuangdong。3.I’mLiHui。4.Iamagirlofseventeen。合并:I’mLiHui,agirlofseventeen(一个17岁的女孩子).1.MichaelJacksonisthekingofpop.2.Hedoeswellinmoonwalking.MichaelJackson,
6、thekingofpop,doeswellinmoonwalking.Exercise2.正确运用短语。（with+宾+宾补，非谓语动词短语，高级词汇）Exercises:Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.___________________,(sing;laugh)theywentbacktoschool.SingingandlaughingThemurdererwasbroughtin,_______________________(with结构）①Themurdere
7、rwasbroughtin,②hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.withhishandstiedbehindhisback.Howtopolishyourcomposition?①Heisverybusy.Heis___busy___abee.②（一般）（高级）Agoodessayisonethatcontainsadvancedvocabulary1.Ihadagoodidea.2.I______________agoodidea.3.Agoodideaoccurredto/cametome.a
8、sascameupwith非谓语动词短语(1)Whilehewaswalkinginthestreet，hemetTim.Whilewalkinginthestreet，hemetTim.Walkinginthestreet，hemetTim.2)Afterhefinishedhiswork，helef
