从评分标准看雅思写作常见错误课件.ppt

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1、IELTSWRITING雅思强化写作雅思作文评分标准常见错误评分标准TaskAchievement/ResponseCoherence&CohesionLexicalResourceGrammaticalRange&AccuracyTaskAchievement常见错误一：错误理解题意二：没有回答所有问题三：忽略题目重心一：错误理解题意(1)Thefigurebelowisatownplanningmap,showingthelikelypositionsoftwonewshoppingcenters…Givenisamapillustratingthesitesof

2、twoshoppingcenters….probable(2)2011.04.30A类Somepeoplethinkthatforeigntouristsabroadshouldbechargedmorethanlocalpeopletovisitacountry’scultural&historicalattractions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?二：没有回答所有问题(1)Anincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosetoliveinbigcities.Whatproblemswillthisbringa

3、bout?Shouldthegovernmentencouragepeopletoliveinsmalltowns?Body=2parasWhat?Should?剑七Test3Thechartbelowshowstheinformationaboutchangesinaveragehouseprices…Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.√√√√√√√Coherence&Cohesion常见错误一：分合段不恰当二：无

4、具体论证，仅重复中心句三：论述跳跃，连接性不强一：分合段不恰当Workingonapart-timebasiscanpreparecollegestudentswellfortheworkplace.Theongoinginvolvementindifferentjobsmayenablethemtogetfamiliarwithallchallengestheymightfaceandbecomecompetitivejobcandidatesaftergraduation.However,sometimes,studentsprobablyfinditdiffic

5、ulttobalanceworkandstudy.建议：一对一二：无具体论证，仅重复中心句Abalanceddiet,coupledwithregularexercise,empowerspeopletocopewellwithstress.Healthyfoodsandregularexercisearerelatedtoone’smentalstate.However,peoplewhohaveafast-pacelifestylecanhardlyenjoybalanceddietandexercise.Therefore,theirdeterioratingh

6、ealthcannotcopewithstress.E---？D---？三：论述跳跃，连接性不强Showingrespectforoldercitizensisessentialtoasociety’sharmony.Peoplewillfeelthattheyareexploitedwhenyoungbutabandonedwhenold.Theeffectontherelationshipbetweenmembersofsocietycanbedevastatingifolderpeopleareperceivedasaburdenandtheirprevious

7、contributionissoonforgotten.LexicalResource常见错误一：用词不够正式，不够学术二：单词错误使用三：滥用修饰语一：用词不够正式、学术(1)避免使用口语词汇Have---Thiswillhavemorenegativeresults.(2)转化简单词汇withthelength/be54kilometerslong---ThemetrosysteminParisextends/covers…bringabout/givebirthto/contributetoconsequences二：单词错误使用1.Colla