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1、雅思写作常见语法错误“好的作文大都是相似的,而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。”Structure:一,内容(TaskResponse回答问题)二,组织结构(CoherenceandCohesion连贯性及一致性)三,词汇(LexicalResource词汇量)四,语法(GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy语法范围及准确性)一,内容【错误一】:无话可说【对策】:关心时事,观察生活,与人交流,看写作范文【错误二】:千言万语无从说起【对策】:积累雅思写作词汇【错误三】:标新立异【对策】:自圆其说即可。二,组织结构【错误一】:天马行空【对策】:起承转合【错误二】:单句游离【对策】
2、:正确使用各种逻辑关系词。(详见附录)三,词汇【错误一】:盲写生词【对策】:同义改写e.g.:望子成龙,望女成凤--Allparentsexpecttheirchildrentohaveapromisingfurther.寄生虫(parasite)Somethingthatisverytinyandlivesonmyskinandsucksmybloodwithoutdoinganywork.(×)【错误二】:同义重现【对策】:积累近义词,反义词,衍生词E.g.:“discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesof```”----benefits;gains;
3、merits;pros;downsides;weakness;drawbacks;cons【错误三】:大词连篇【对策】:整体协调最重要【错误四】:词性使用错误。【对策】:背单词需了解词性。【练1/2】Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.【改】Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney.【练2/2】Moreandmorepeopleagainstthispoint.【改】Moreandmorepeopleareagainstthispoint.四,语法【错误一】:破句(破句是把不完整的句子当做独立的句子来写时发生的错误。)【对策】从
4、属连词/引导词/分词开头的从句不能单独存在,需要依赖于另一个句子。【练1/3】Studentsshouldbeencouragedtotakepart-timejob.Becauseitwillbenefitstudentsandtheirfamily,eventhesocietyasawhole.【评】从属连词引起的破句。【扩展】常见的从属连词(引导词):详见附录after,unless,evenif,eventhough,since,before,when,because,if,who,while,as,asif,which,although,sothat,where,until,
5、that【改】Studentsshouldbeencouragedtotakepart-timejobbecauseitwillbenefitstudentsandtheirfamily,eventhesocietyasawhole.【练2/3】Alargenumberofpeoplethinkthattheyhadcompletedtheireducationwhentheyfinishedtheirschooling.Notrealizingthataperson’seducationisamostimportantaspectofhislife.【评】分词引起的破句。【改】···
6、··.Theyfailtorealizethat```.【练3/3】Internationaltravelhasgivenrisetolargenumbersofemploymentopportunities.Forexample,retail,hospitalityandtransportation.【评】增加细节引起的破句。往往是以下面的词语开头:forexample,also,except,suchas,including,especially,among,like【改】Internationaltravelhasgivenrisetolargenumbersofemployme
7、ntopportunitiesinretail,hospitalityandtransportation.【错误二】:串句(串句是不用连词或标点而把两个(或以上)独立的句子串在一起的错误表达。)【对策】在两个完整的句子中间使用:1.句号;2.连词;3.分号。【练1/3】Noonecandenythefactthatairpollutionisanextremelyseriousproblem,thecityauthoritiesshouldta