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1、高考英语MyPocketMoney英语书面表达写作指导 假如你是某国际学校记者站的小记者,你校以"HowISpendMyPocketMoney"为题向全校学生做问卷调查,结果如以下表格所示。请你写一篇文章分析该调查结果反映的问题并给出你的建议,发表在校英文网站上。词数:120左右。项目花费(元/月)占每月总支出百分比书籍1512.5％文具108.3％服装5041.7％[零食2016.7％娱乐2520.8％合计120100％写作分析:第一步,认真审题,提炼要点。 一审体裁:本次写作任务为说明文体裁写作。 二审结构:文章可分为三部分。首先,简要交代关于问卷调
2、查的一些情况,如调查的内容和结果等,以引出写作的主题。然后,结合表格中的数据分析调查结果反映的问题。最后,根据反映的问题给出自己的建议。 三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点。1.spend120yuanofpocketmoney2.don’tspendmuchonbooksandstationery3.leadtoseriousproblems4.pursuematerialcomforts5.helpthestudentsspendmoneyreasonably6.theirparentsandteachers第二步,紧扣主题,扩点成句。1.Ahighschool
3、studentspends120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage.2.Theydon’tspendmuchonbooksandstationery.3.Studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothingandsnacks,whichcouldleadtoseriousproblems.4.Theymaylearntopursuematerialcomforts.5.Forthesakeofhelpingthestudentsspendmoneyreasonably...6.Theirparentsandteacher
4、sshouldteachthemwhatisimportantandhowtospendmoneyproperly.第三步,补充修改,连句成篇。范文1:Nowadaysahighschoolstudentspends120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage.Almosthalfofthemoneyisspentonclothing.Andthemoneyspentonamusementandsnackstakesup20.8%and16.7%ofthe120yuanrespectively.However,theydon’tspendmu
5、chonbooksandstationery.Obviously,studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothingandsnacks,whichcouldleadtoseriousproblems.Forexample,theymaylearntopursuematerialcomfortsandcompareclothingwiththatoftheirclassmates,bothofwhichwillhaveabadimpactontheirstudies.3用心爱心专心Accordingly,forthesakeofhelpingthestu
6、dentsspendmoneyreasonably,theirparentsandteachersshouldteachthemwhatisimportantandhowtospendmoneyproperly.亮点展示:1.文章结构合理:首段介绍调查情况,第二段阐述其危害,最后一段提出自己的建议；2.正确使用定语从句,使文章句式多样:...,studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothing...,whichcouldleadtoseriousproblems./...,theymaylearntopursuematerialcomforts...,
7、bothofwhichwillhaveabad...3.obviously和accordingly不仅使文章更有逻辑性,而且起到了承上启下的作用。范文2:Accordingtothesurveyon"HowISpendMyPocketMoney"conductedbyourschool,studentsspendabout120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage.Comparedwiththesmallamountspentonbooksandstationery,almosthalfofth
