高考英语MyPocketMoney英语书面表达写作指导

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1、高考英语MyPocketMoney英语书面表达写作指导假如你是某国际学校记者站的小记者，你校以”HowISpendMyPocketMoney”为题向全校学牛做问卷调查,结果如以下表格所示。请你写一篇文章分析该调查结果反映的问题并给出你的建议,发衣在校英文网站上。词数：120左右。项目花费（元/月）占每月总支出百分比书籍1512.5%文具108.3%服装5041.7%零食2016.7%娱乐•2520.8%合计120100%写作分析：第一步，认真审题，提炼要点。一审体裁:木次写作任务为说明文体裁写作。二审结构:文章可分为三部分。首先,简要交代关于问

2、港调査的一些情况，如调査的内容和结果等，以引出写作的主题。然后，结合表格中的数据分析调查结果反映的问题。最后,根据反映的问题给出口己的建议。三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点。1.spend120yuanofpocketmoney2.donspendmuchonbooksandstationery3.leadtoseriousproblems4.pursuematerialcomforts5.helpthestudentsspendmoneyreasonably6.theirparentsandteachers第二步，紧扌II主题，扩点成句。

3、1.Ahighschoolstudentspends120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage・2.Theydon'tspendmuchonbooksandstationery.3.Studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothingandsnacks,whichcouldleadtoseriousproblems・4.Theymaylearntopursuematerialcomforts.5.Forthesakeofhelpingthestudentsspendmoneyreasonably

4、…6.Theirparentsandteachersshouldteachthemwhatisimportantandhowtospendmoneyproperly・第三步，补充修改，连句成篇。范文1:Nowadaysahighschoolstudentspends120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage・Almosthalfofthemoneyisspentonclothing.Andthemoneyspentonamusementandsnackstakesup20.8%and16.7%ofthe120yu

5、anrespectively.刖胡,theydon'tspendmuchonbooksandstationery.Obviously,studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothingandsnacks,whichcouldleadtoseriousproblems.exampl衣theymaylearntopursuematerialcomfortsandcompareclothingwiththatoftheirclassmates^bothofwhichwillhaveabadimpactontheirstudies.

6、According从forthesakeofhelpingthestudentsspendmoneyreasonably,theirparentsandteachersshouldteachthemwhatisimportantandhowtospendmoneyproperly・亮点展示：1.文章结构合理:旨段介绍调查情况，第二段阐述其危害，最后一段捉出口己的建议；2.止确使用定语从句，使文章句式多样:…,studentsspendtoomuchmoneyonclothingwhichcouldleadtoseriousproblems./…

7、，theymaylearntopursuematerialcomforts…，bothofwhichwillhaveabad・••3.obviously和accordingly不仅使文章更有逻辑性，而且起到了承上启下的作用。范文2:Accordingthesurveyon"HowISpendMyPocketMoney0conductedbyourschool,studentsspendabout120yuanofpocketmoneypermonthonaverage・Comparedwiththesmallamountspentonbooks

8、andstationery^almosthalfofthemoneyisspentonclothing.冈moneyspentonsnacksanda