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1、短文改错一Twoyearsago,Mr.SmithtaughtmyselfEnglish.Hewasfriendlytousstudent.Thoughhewasstrictinthestudents,hewasrespected.However,hewasalwayscarefulandforgotthings,thatbroughthimalotoftrouble.Forexample,oncehewasontheholidaybytheseaandheforgotwhichhotelhewa
2、sstayingin.Afterdark,hedidn’tknowwherestayforthenight.Itwashiswifewhofindhimunderabigtreebehindthehotel.Heardthisexperience,weallburstintolaughter.SuchareMr.Smith,amanwhomeveryonelooksupto.短文改错二ItookourforeignteacherMr.Brown,hecametoChinaforthefirstti
3、me,totheGreatWallinlastweekend.HavingtoldaboutthehistoryoftheGreatWall,hewasamazingatthisworldwonder.HewasstruckbythebeautifuloftheGreatWall.SoItookphotoofhim,whichwouldbeagoodmemoryforhim.Atthetop,Mr.Brownwasveryinterestedintheactivityofprotectingthe
4、environmentthathewaseagertojoininandsignhisname.BoththeGreatWallortheChinesepeopledeepimpressedhim.Hedecidedtovisitmoreplacesofinterestwhenfree.短文改错三Myhometownisasmallvillage.Smallasitis,butit’sverybeautiful.Thereareanumberofhillaroundmyhometownandthe
5、yareverybeautiful.Inspring,weflykitesaremadebythemselvesonthetopofthehills.Thekitesflyveryhighly.Insummer,thetreesandgrassaregreenandtheflowersarebrightonthehills.Beside,thewildapplesarenicetoeating.Inautumn,cornsatthefootofthehillswereripe.Inwinter,w
6、henitsnows,somethingiscoveredwithsnow.Weplaywithsnowandmakesnowmen.Inmyhometowntherearebluesky,freshair,sweetwaterandkindpeople.Ilovemyhometown!短文改错四DearEditor,ThisismyfirsttimetowriteanEnglishe-mail.IcamecrossyourmagazineabouttwomonthsbeforeandIloved
7、itfromthefirstmoment.Aftertheschool,Irantobuyit.SofarIboughttwoissues.Ilikeeveryeditorinyourmagazine.Learningwiththemalwaysmakemehappy.NextmonthIwillchallengemetoreadanadvancedmagazine.SoIwillalsobuyyourmagazine,readtwomagazinesatthesametime.Ithinkthi
8、swillhelpmegetthroughmysparetimemeaningful.Bestwishtoallofyou.Yours,LiHua短文改错五Yesterdayafternoonarobberywashap-penedinabankinourcity.Accordingwhatsomepeoplesaid,itwasfiveminutesto5:00pm,justaftertheclosingtimeofthebank.Butitwasrainingheavy,wit
