复习课：英语书面表达.ppt

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1、Englishwriting——Thewaystoimproveyourwriting中考英语书面表达评分标准1.总体评分原则：要点+语言表达+语篇+词数+卷面；2.评分时，应注意内容要点(10分)、应用词汇和语法的准确性(7分)和上下文的连贯性(1分)。3.词数:80-100词，少于80词扣1分。4.如果书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。（卷面不整洁扣1分）书面表达六步法：1审题：审清作文体裁、时态、人称等细节；2列提纲:文章分几段，以及每段大体内容；3扩展：把提示信息扩写成句子，使文章内容完整，要点全面；4.连接：合理恰当

2、地运用关联词和过渡句使文章结构紧凑，衔接自然；5修改：查拼写、语法、标点等问题；检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；6抄写：书写规范,卷面整洁。书面表达六步法牛刀小试在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork如何度假调查报告提倡假日休闲stayathomeworkvisi

3、tfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)1.Alotofpeopletravel.2.Somepeoplestayathome.3.Asmallnumberofpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.4.Afewpeoplegotowork.5.Enjoyyourvacation.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasu

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5、wdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsoasmallnumberofpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(co

6、nnect)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusylifeduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Pe

7、oplewhorelaxwellworkwell.改(correct)Andvisitingfriendsorparentsalsomakespeoplerelaxed.Proverb（谚语）/sayingHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusylifeduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayat

8、home,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andvisitingfriendsorparentsalsomakespeoplerelaxed.Ho