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1、句子润色，提高写作分数一、用从句：（定语从句，名词性从句（主，表，宾，同），状语从句）1.Igotonabus.Therewerealreadytoomanypeopleonit.(定语从句)Igotonabuswheretherewerealreadytoomanypeopleonit.2.Hegotthefirstplaceintheexam.Itsurprisedusalot.(非限制性定语从句)Hegotthefirstplaceintheexam，whichsurprisedusalot3.Louisewasbornin1931.Heisafamousartistnow.(定语从

2、句)Louisewasbornin1931whoisafamousartistnow.4.Herparentswouldn’tlethimmarrythegirl.Herfamilywaspoor.(定语从句)Herparentswouldn’tlethimmarrythegirlwhosefamilywaspoor.5.Itsurprisedmegreatly.Ifoundshewassuchafineswimmer.(用what引导的主语从句)Whatsurprisedmegreatlywastofindshewassuchafineswimmer.6.Heofferedmeapiec

3、eofadvicethatIshouldcheerupandstartalloveragain.(what引导的主语从句)WhatheofferedmewasthatIshouldcheerupandstartalloveragain.7.Theadvantagesareasfollows.Itisveryconvenientforustocommunicatewitheachother.Itisverycheapforustobuyit.(用表语从句合成一句)Theadvantagesarethatitisveryconvenientforustocommunicatewitheacho

4、therandverycheapforustobuyit.8.Thenewsisthatwewonthegame.Itmadeuswildwithjoy.(用同位语从句)Thenewsthatwewonthegamemadeuswildwithjoy.9.Heworkedveryhard.Hemadegreatprogressinhisstudy.(状语从句)Heworkedveryhardsothatmadegreatprogressinhisstudy.10.Heonlyenteredthecontestforfun,buthewonthefirstprize.(状语从句)Althou

5、ghheonlyenteredthecontestforfun,hewonthefirstprize.二．用非谓语（todo,doing,done，with复合结构）1.WhenIheardthat,Iwasmuchmoved.Hearingthat,Iwasmuchmoved.2.Theywerefacedwithmanyproblems.Theydidn’tloseheart.Facedwithmanyproblems,theydidn’tloseheart.3.Inthispicture,amotherbirdstaysinhernestinabigtree.Themotherbir

6、dwatchesherbabiesflyingaway.Inthispicture,amotherbirdstaysinhernestinabigtree,watchingherbabiesflyingaway.4.Hewantstobeadmittedbytheidealuniversity.Hestudieshard.Inordertobeadmittedbytheidealuniversityhestudieshard.5.Thegirlisstaringatthepicture.Thegirlismyformerclassmate.Thegirlstaringatthepictur

7、eismyformerclassmate.6.Hefellasleep.Thelightswerestillon.(with复合结构)Hefellasleep,withthelightson.7.Societyisdevelopingrapidly.ItisquitenecessarythatweshouldhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer.(with复合结构)Withsoci