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1、PolishyourWritingZhangLing1712高考作文的华丽变身遇难心不慌，遇易心更细。LearningAims:（学习目标）knowbeautifulsentencesbycomparingtwopassages.canusesixbasicwaystopolishtheirwriting.strengthenthestudents’skillsofwriting,anddeveloptheirconfidence..Step1:comparision(对比两篇文章)Lifeinthefuture1Th
2、escienceandtechnologydevelopedfast.Inthefuture,wewillwearakindofspecialclothes.Theclothescanchangethecolour.Wecanchoosemorekindsoffood.Everyhomewillhavearobot.Therobotcanhelpusdohousework.Ifyouliveinthefuture,you’llfeelmuchbetterthannow.Lifeinthefuture2Withthede
3、velopmentofscienceandtechnology,Inthefuture,wewillwearakindofspecialclothes,whichcanchangethecolouraswelike.Therearemoreandmorekindsoffoodwecanchoose.Besides,everyhomewillhavearobottodohousework.Livinginthefuture,you’llfeelmuchbetterthannow.运用较多的高级句式1.覆盖了所有的要点2.
4、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？1.Wealllikehisperformanceverymuch,whichcanmakeushappy.定语从句Step2:Revision2.Suroudedbymanystars,Zhaoliyinghadaphototaken.非谓语动词(non-finiteverb)3.Thesong”RedDragonFly”issungbytigerteam.恰当使用被动句bedone4.Poorashewas,h
5、ewashappy.倒装句式：表语/状语+as+主语+其他5.Withthenoisegoingon,Icouldn’tgoonstudying.使用with+宾语+宾补的复合结构ItwasnotuntilIgraduatedthatIrealizedtheimportanceoflearning.Itisrunningmanthatmanystudentslikebest.使用强调句(emphasis)：用Itis…that(who)…&Itisnotuntil…that…强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。强调句with复
6、合结构Seniorsentences定语从句非谓语动词被动句…句式多样，文章增“靓”Howmanyseniorsentencepatternshaveyoulearnedrecently？倒装句Thisisourschool.Ourschoolischanginggreatly.(定从)Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(非谓语动词)Wemusttakemeasurestostoppollution.(被动句)AsI’mweak,Iwillmaketheeff
7、ort.(as倒装)Ican’tgooutwithyoubecauseIhavealotofworktodo.(with复合结构)Smokingdoesgreatharmtoboys.（强调句型）Step3:I.即学即用，小试牛刀（改写句子）Thisisourschoolwhich/thatischanginggreatly.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Measuresmustbetakentostoppollution.WeakasIam,Iwillmake
8、theeffort.Withalotofworktodo,Ican’tgooutwithyou.Itissmokingthatdoesharmtoboys.132456Let’shaveamatch!II:走近高考范文Fillintheblanks（2015山东）1.Iwasadimttedtokeyuniversity_____
