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1、英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting淮阳中学高三英语组：胡丹Teachinggoals1.引导学生认识写作中常出现的错误并改正。2.引导学生掌握基本的写作步骤和要领。3.鼓励学生通过当堂写作训练，提高记叙文（夹叙夹议）写作能力和兴趣。((2010·湖北高考)结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。内容包括：(1)你是如何看待微笑的作用的；(2)谈谈你所经历的让你最感动或给你印象最深刻的一次微笑；(3)你对微笑的感悟。checkyourclassworkWhichcompos
2、itionfeelsmoreattractive,why?Discussion--找出这篇作文的错误并改正Peopleoftensay,"Asmilecanmakeyoutenyearsyounger."Notonlysmilecanhelpusforgettheunhappythings,butalsoithelpuskeepgoodmood.OnceIfailedinmyhistoryexam.Iareverysad.Later,ItellmygrandmathisthingsayIhard-workinghi
3、storyeveryday,buthistorystillnotgood.Ididn'tknowwhatIcoulddo.Finally,Ipassedtheexambecuaseofhersmileandencouragement."Youdon'tgiveupbecuasefailureisthemotherofsuccess."mygrandmasaid.Iknowthekindnesssmileislikesthesun,canwarmedourheart.cansmilehelpswas中式中文中式中文1
4、23456798ItoldmygrandmathisthingandsaideventhoughIstudiedhard,Icouldn'tachievehighgrades.Iknowthekindsmilecanmakeusfeelwarmlikethesun.书面表达有方法三段结构把架搭十句中文心中划主谓时态要一致每句短语，句型化特殊句型锦添花Conclusion1.一般句式：Peopleoftensay,"Asmilecanmakeyoutenyearsyounger."高级句式：Asthesayinggo
5、es,"Asmilecanmakeyoutenyearsyounger."如何句型锦添花？看看同学们的作文中哪些句子可以锦添花？2.一般句式：Ipassedtheexambecuaseofhersmileandencouragement.Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.高级句式：Icouldn’thavepassedtheexambutforhersmile
6、andencouragement.(用虚拟语气）小试牛刀1.Whentheygottothestation,theymettheyoungman.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.2.Heisaverygoodboy.(改为感叹句)Whatagoodboyheis!hardly...when...一。。。就。。Asthesayinggoes,"Asmilecanmakeyoutenyearsyounger."Notonlycansmilehelpu
7、sforgettheunhappythings,butalsoithelpsuskeepgoodmood.OnceIfailedinmyhistoryexam.Iwasverysad.Later,ItoldmygrandmathisthingandsaideventhoughIstudiedhard,Icouldn'tachievehighgrades.Ididn'tknowwhatIcoulddo.Icouldn’thavepassedtheexambutforherencouragement."Don'tgiv
8、eupbecuasefailureisthemotherofsuccess."mygrandmasaid.Iknowthekindsmilecanmakeusfeelwarmlikethesun.修改后的作文Peopleoftensay,"Asmilecanmakeyoutenyearsyounger."Notonlysmilecanhelpusforget
