英语四六级写作.ppt

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1、四六级写作Whichoneisbetter?Itmakesmefeelpainfultothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.Itpainsmetothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.ItwillbeouraimtoensureproperhealthcareforeachandeveryoneoftheChinesepeople.Ouraimistoensureproperhealthcare

2、forallChinese.Whichoneisbetter?Thesearchoftheforestthattheyconductedwasentirelycomplete.Thesearchoftheforestwascomplete.Theyconductedacompletesearchoftheforest.Hehasnosenseofprinciples,whetherheisinpublicorinprivate.Hehasnoprinciples,publicorprivate.Whichoneisbe

3、tter?Wheneveranyonetelephonedhertoaskherforhelpwiththeirhomeworkshealwaysobligedrightaway.Sheimmediatelyobligedanyonewhotelephonedforhelpwithhomework.Whichoneisbetter?Anotherimportantaspectisgoodhealth.Itisoneofourgreatblessings.Itmaybeachievedthroughproperdieta

4、ndexercise.Restisalsodesirable.Thegreatblessingofgoodhealthmaybehadthroughproperdiet,exercise,andrest.写作技巧--简洁才是美策略之一：用介词短语替代从句。Wordy:Whiletheywereplayingtennis,shestartedanargumentthatlastedallmorning.Better:Duringtennisshestartedanargumentthatlastedallmorning.

5、Wordy:Whenyoucometothesecondtrafficlight,turnright.Better:Atthesecondtrafficlightturnleft.写作技巧--简洁才是美策略之二：删除诸如"whois”或"thatis"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语。Wordy:Thenovel,whichiswritteninthreeparts,toldastorythattookplaceintheMiddleAges.Better:Thethree-partnoveltoldastorysetin

6、theMiddleAges.写作技巧--简洁才是美策略之三：剔除你不需要的单词Twojointpartnerswillpresenttheirviewsoveralong-distancetelephonecall.写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词joint和telephone，注意删去不必要的词。写作技巧--简洁才是美策略之四：表达否定意义时，尽量避免使用否定词。英语中很多词不用no或者not也能表达否定含义的词汇。Thuscollegestudentswhodonothavesufficientfinan

7、cialbacking,也就是collegestudentswholackssufficientfinancialbacking。Whichoneisbetter?TheArtofStrategywaswrittenbySunTzu.Itisafifty-six-hundred-wordChineseclassicalwork.Thewriterputforthasetofprinciplesinaverytightlycompressedmanner.Theydealwithhowtodefeatopposition

8、sandwinbattles.Inhisfifty-six-hundredwordclassic,TheArtofStrategy,SunTzuputforthatightlycompressedsetofprinciplesforachievingtriumphoveropposition.Whichoneisbetter?Of