英语人教版八年级上册writing a travel diary.pptx

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1、WritingaTravelDiary新目标八年级上册unit1安徽省舒城县第二中学夏大琼通过这节课的学习，同学们需要达到下列要求。Knowinghowtocorrectacomposition.Understandingthestandardsofagoodcomposition.Beingabletowriteatraveldiary.Learningtoworkandexchangeopinionswithothers.WanfoLakeMountHuanglet'sreadAugust24,2016Tuesda

2、ySunnyIwenttovisittheGreatWallwithmyfriendsduringthesummervacation.Wewenttherebybus.Ittookusabouttwohourstogettothere.Itwashotandwindy.Therewerethousandspeople.Whenwesawagroupofforeigners,wewentupandtalkedwiththem.WetoldthemlotsofhistoryoftheGreatWall.Theywereve

3、rysurprisedwhentheysawthatourEnglishwereexellentandweknewalotabouttheGreatWall'shistory.Theythankedusalotandwereallyhadagoodtime.WefeelproudofourselvesandbeingChinese.Itwasapleasanttrip.Iwillneverforgetit.Whatdoesthewriterwanttoexpress?WhentogoWithwhomWheretogoH

4、owtogetWhattodoHowtofeelAugust24,2016TuesdayWithfriendsTheGreatWallBybusTalkedwithforeignersabouttheGreatWallApleasanttrip,neverforgetTraveltotheGreatWallLet'sgetmaininformationfromthediary.August24,2016TuesdaySunnyIwenttovisittheGreatWallwithmyfriendsduringthes

5、ummervacation.Wewenttherebybus.Ittookusabouttwohourstogettothere.Itwashotandwindy.Therewerethousandspeople.Whenwesawagroupofforeigners,wewentupandtalkedwiththem.WetoldthemlotsofhistoryoftheGreatWall.TheywereverysurprisedwhentheysawthatourEnglishwereexellentandwe

6、knewalotabouttheGreatWall'shistory.Theythankedusalotandwereallyhadagoodtime.WefeelproudofourselvesandbeingChinese.Itwasapleasanttrip.Iwillneverforgetit.作文修改的思路连词：适当运用连词使文章的结构更紧凑。but,because,when,if,atfirst,afterthat,finally,thatistosay……句型：适当用一些主从复合句，如定语从句，宾语从句

7、，状语从句等使语言更丰富。语法:时态，语态，拼写，词性，主谓一致，名词单复数，词的搭配等方面避免错误。Eg：Correctthesesentences.Igotothebeachyesterdaymorning.Jacklikeplayingtennisverymuch.Weenteredintoahistorymuseum.Igotlost.Iarrivedtherelate.YoushoulddriveascarefulaspossiblewentssocarefullyDiscusshowtocorrectth

8、ediarywithyourpartnerAugust24,2016TuesdaySunnyIwenttovisittheGreatWallwithmyfriendsduringthesummervacation.Wewenttherebybus.Ittookusabouttwohourstogettothere.Itwashot