【尚友论坛】申请哈佛大学的Essay范文_个人成长经历.pdf

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1、这是一篇成功申请到美国哈佛大学的Essay短文，作者JasonY.Shah。personalgrowth。Essay短文题材类型仍旧为申请中常见的个人经历类，在范文最后附有招生官的点评与分析。HarvardUniversity哈佛大学申请Essay范文"HurricaneTransformations"作者JasonY.ShahIusedtospendendlessnightswide-eyed,anxiouslydreadingahighschoollifeteemingwithharshpeersandhollowhall

2、ways,immersedinacoldatmosphereeternallyvoidoffamiliarity'swarmembrace.I'lladmitthatthisisnotahopefulvision;nevertheless,IcertainlyriskedacceptingthisuglyrealitywhenIsupportedmyfamily'sdecisiontouprootitselfandmovefromnewJerseytoFloridaaftermyfreshmanyear.Somewhatfex

3、ible,myparentsgavemeasignifcantvoiceinthedecisionasIwouldbemostprofoundlyaffected.Yet,Ihadspentmyentirelifeinthesamecozycenter-hallcolonialinthesamenewJerseysuburb.Ihadknownmyfriendssinceyouth,whenwehadsnowballfghtsduringtheicywinterandranthroughlawnsprinklersduring

4、thesummer.Teachersknewmyfamilyandcordiallygreetedmeinthehalls.Icouldnevermove.Inmymind,Iwasset!OrwasI?Instincttuggedatmyheart,somethingwasmissinginmylifebecauselifeisnotaboutbeing"set."Luredbytheconceptofafreshstart,Iyearnedforthechancetowritemyownstory.AsthesonofIn

5、dianimmigrants,Ihadadventureinmyblood;thetimehadcometoventurebeyondmycomfortzoneandstakeauniqueclaiminFlorida.Thefrstfewmonthsweretrying;onlybirdsjoinedmeduringlunchandIspendweekendsalonewritingintrospectivepoetry.Myffteenthbirthdaycenteredonafamilydiscussionaboutou

6、raffectionforournewhomewhileHurricaneCharleypoundedthelifeoutofFlorida.Iregrettedmoving.Byfortuitousresearch,however,Ilearnedmoreaboutinnovativeentrepreneurswhowereshapingourworld.Ihavenotlookedbacksince.Myself-infictedadversityfnallyevokedpersonalgrowth.Iconstantly

7、introducedmyselftostrangersandpursuedmypassionsindifferentactivities.Bylaunchingandsupportingcommunityorganizations,ItransformedintoaproactiveleaderasIovercamediffcultiesinvariedcontexts.ContinuouslyseekingchallengesinthecommunityandIBProgram,Iteamedupwithothermotiv

8、atedcitizensandstudentstothriveandcontributetomynewhome.TodayIamhighlyinvolvedinmycommunitywithmanyfriendsandmentors.nobodyknowsmeformyfam