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1、Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点具体做法：用笔勾画2008春节前，在我国的部分地区出现了百年罕见的特大暴风雪，给人民带来了重大损失，造成若干人伤亡，很多人深受失去家园之苦。获悉这一消息后，人们纷纷伸出了援助之手，你们班级也不甘落后。请以班委会的名义根据提示写一封100词左右的英文倡议书。要求语义连贯，中心突出，详略得当，可适当发挥。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)提示：1、暴风雪造成的重大损失；2、大家纷纷献出爱心；3、作为学生我们应该做些什么？第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体
2、做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！WriteanOutline可以用英文或中文IntroductionMainbodyConclusionGreattroubleShowlovealloverthecountryWhatshouldwestudentsdo?(看写作要求）(自拟）(自拟）（已给出）写作前：确定人称、时态写作后：检查词数足够、要点完整，没有语法错误Dearclassmates,Asuddensnowstormattackedsomepartsofourcountrybeforethe2008SpringFestival.Itbroughtuslotsoft
3、rouble.Thousandsofpeopleweretrappedinthestations,intheairportsandonthehighways.Insuchaheavysnowstorm,alotofpeoplesufferedfromthelossoftheirhomes.Whatwasworse,manypeoplewerehurt,evenlosttheirlives.Afterthenewswasreported,peoplealloverthecountryshowedtheirgreatloveindifferentways.Somegavefood
4、,clothes,drinkingwater,medicineandeverythingnecessary,andsomeevengavemoneytothem.Asstudents,ofcourseweshouldtryourbesttohelpthosepeopleintrouble.Soofferyouronlypocketmoney,let’shelptofilltheworldwithlove.classcommitteeDearclassmates,Asuddensnowstormattackedsomepartsofourcountrybeforethe2008
5、SpringFestival.Itbroughtlotsoftroubletothepeople.Somepeoplelosttheirlives.Peoplealloverthecountrydonatedfood,drinkingwater,colthestothem.Aswestudents,whatshouldwedo?Weshoulddonateourpocketmoneytothem.Wecanalsosendthemouroldbooks.扣分原因一词数不够！每少5词，扣1分，约少40词，只得12分。Dearclassmates,Asuddensnowstorm
6、attackedsomepartsofourcountrybeforethe2008SpringFestival.Itwasthemostserioussnowstormduringthecentry.Itbroughtpeoplelotsoftrouble.Manypeoplewerehurt.Somepeopleevenlosttheirlives.Alotofpeoplesufferedfromthelossoftheirhomes.Afterthenewswasreported,weareallsorryforthem.Weshouldtryourbesttohelp
7、themoutoftrouble!Weshouldsaveourpocketmoneytodonateittothem.Wecanalsosendthebooksandclothesthatweneedn’tusetothem.Lettheworldbefulloflove!扣分原因二遗漏要点！少一要点，约扣5分，只得15分。加入献爱心时态、语态、结构、短语搭配为大错，1处1分。拼写、大小写、标点符号为小错，3处1分。Asuddensnowstormattackedsomepartsofourcount
