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1、英语作文批改书面表达:以“Myopinionon……”为题,写一篇英语短文。要求:(1)能写出自己的真实见解;(2)层次清晰,意思连贯;(3)书写工整,卷面整洁;(4)字数70—80词左右。学生作文范文:MyopinionontelevisionTelevisionhascomeintoourlifeformanyyears.Wecan’tlivehappilywithouttelevision.①Itcangiveusthelatestinformationandnews.Itcanopenupoure
2、yesandincreaseourknowledge.Wecangethappinessfromtheplaysontelevision.We’llbeboringalldayifthereisnotelevision.Televisionprogramsareattractive.Afterawholeday’shardworkwecansitbeforethetelevisionanddrinkacupoftea.Howwonderfulitis!②Televisionisalsobadforpeop
3、le’shealth.It’sbadforyoutowatchTVtoolong,especiallybadforyoureyes.ItistruethatwatchingTVcaninfluenceourbehavior.However,itdependsonwhatwedo.③Wecan’tchangewhatisonTV,butwecanchoosewhatwewatch.Doyouagree?教师点评:①Welldone!Howwellyoumadethesentence!②Sosmart!You
4、tellmeyourrealthoughtabouttelevision.③It’sverycleverofyoutoendyourworkwiththisbeautifulsentencethatyouhavelearned!Good!It’sexcellentyouhaven'tmadeanymistakesthistime!I’msogladtoseeyourworkhasimproved!Butit’smuchbettertobecreative.You’dbetterusesomeshortse
5、ntencestoinsteadofthelongones.Doyouthinkso?Ihopeyoucanworkharderandmakemoreprogress.Cheerup!
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