英语作文,批改范例

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1、英语作文,批改范例篇一：雅思大作文批改范例8Somepeoplethinkthatpersonalhappinesssdirectlyrelatedtoeconomicsuccess.Othersarguethathappinessdependsondifferentfactors.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinionWhatisthekeytoaccesstohappinesshasarousedpeople'sinterest.Somepeople

2、claimthatmoneyplaysavitalroleingaininghappiness,whileothersthinkthatthereareavarietyofelementsconstrictingtoit.Personally,Iagreewiththelatteropinion.Moneyprovidespeoplewithmoreopportunitiestopursuehappiness,becauseeconomicsuccesscanmakeitpossibleforpe

3、opletoenhancetheirqualityoflife.Bypurchasingexpensivejewels,luxuryhouse,sportscar,etc.withoutworriesofmonetarypressure,wealthypersoncanenjoybetterlivingstandardsthanthatofordinarypeople.Whenfinancialpressureandlifestressdonotexistinone’slife,heorsheis

4、likelytohavelessworryandhaverichentertainment,therebyachievingtheaccesstohappiness.Althoughfortuneissignificanttoobtainhappiness,therearealsomanyotherfactorsformimportantpartsofeudemonia.Anactivelifestylecanpromptpeople'sspiritualtreasure.Thismean

5、sthatpeoplecanreceivehappinessbyhavingahealthylife,warmrelativesandintimatefriends.ThesevaluablefactorsenablepeoplehaveapositiveattitudetotackledifficultiesandenjoyahappyIife.AsfarasIamconcerned,happinesscannotalwaysbepurchasedbymoney.Richmateriallife

6、sometimescouldcausenegativeimpactonachievinghappiness.Itisnoteworthythatnumerousofwealthypeoplewhohaveaffluentpossessions,incontrast,haveoftenendedupinasicklifestyle.Thismakesthemsufferfromsickness,lonelyanddesperation,inthelightoffactthatmoneyisnogua

7、ranteeofhappiness.Tosummarize,financialsuccesscouldgivepeopleaneaseIifetoenjoyhappiness.However,withoutanactivelifestyleandspiritualtreasure,happinesswillnotbesustainablymaintained.总点评：本篇文章得分:6.5篇二：英语作文批改几法英语作文批改几法目前，许多教师普遍重视英语作文的写作训练，从书写要求到内容点拨，可谓精细之

8、极，但作文的最后一个环节，即作文批改，却忽略了方式方法的改革。很多教师面对一堆堆作文，一句句地看，一本本地批，而学生却旧错重犯，原因就是作文批改给学生留下的印象不够深刻。面对这种现状，笔者对英语作文批改进行了各种尝试，彻底改变以往教师批阅、学生被动修改的批阅模式，让学生成为评改得的主人，让学生尝到成功的喜悦，正如叶圣陶老先生一直主张的“教是为了不教”。范例自改法第一步，范文展示。教师讲范文展示出来，要求学生对范文人称、时态、结构熟记于心，对于考查目的有清醒的认识。第二步，点拨深化。