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1、英语写作课授课人：高家店中学郝明2016年9月23日规划人生，成就未来。请以“MyDream”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你的梦想。Brainstorming:What’syourdream?MyDream体裁：________内容：分____部分，时态：记叙文31.Whatisyourdream?一般将来时为主3.Thethingsyouwilldo2.ThereasonsofyourdreamThefirstpart:Usefulexpressions1.Mydreamistobe/do…(开门见山
2、）2.Everyonehashisdream.Mydreamis…3.Formydream,Iwill…4.WhenIgrowup,Iamgoingto…5.Iwanttobe/do…whenIgrowup6.Eversincemychildhood,Ihavehadadreamof…7.Asthesayinggoes,“Dreamisthesunoflife.”/Thereisasaying,“…”(俗话说得好…)Thesecondpart:Usefulexpressions1.Thereason
3、whyIhavethisdreamisthat…2.Therearemanyreasonsforthisdream.First,…second,…third,…finally…Firstly,…secondly,…then…atlast…Foronething,…foranother,…Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…Tobeginwith/Firstofall…besides…what’smore3.Iremember…SoIwantto…4.Iwillbe/do…be
4、cause…Thethirdpart:Usefulexpressions1.Inaword,Iwilltrymybestto…tomakemydreamcometrue.2.Inshort,tomakemydreamcometrue,Imusttakeactions…3.Torealizemydream,Imust…4.Inmyopinion,Iwill…5.AsfarasIamconcerned,I’mgoingto…6.Inconclusion,nowIshould…MyTips:HowtoGe
5、tHighMarksinyourcomposition善于使用形容词、副词、短语、比较级善于使用排比、插入语、被动语态、衔接词善于使用低难度高亮度的词善于使用语气词、地道英语善于使用强调句型，长短句交替使用保证不出错，争取出彩Sample:学科网zxxkwMyDreamChinaDreamismadeupofallChinesepeople’sdreams.Asamiddleschoolstudent,what’smydream?IdreamofbecomingateacherwhenIgrowup
6、,andIhopetoworkinmyoldschool.BecauseIwanttorewardmyteachersforteachingmesowell.I’llalsotrymybesttoteachmystudentsasmyteacherstaughtme.Toachievemydream,I’llhavetostudyharderfromnowon,I’llnevergiveupmydreamnomatterwhatdifficultiesImeet.I’msuremydreamwill
7、cometrueaslongasIholdontoit.Ifeveryonedoesso,IstronglybelieveourChinaDreammustcometrueandChinawillgetbetterandbetter.Practicemakesperfect!Writing:学科网zxxkwJudgebyyourself短文通顺完整，能包含所有要点，表达清楚流畅，语言基本无误。9-10分短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误。7-8分能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多
8、错误，但表达尚能达意。5-6分仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语言有较多错误，影响意思表达。3-4分仅能写出与文章有关的单词或短语。0-2分DiscussionExchangeandcheckyourpartner’swriting,thendiscusswhosecompositionisthebestoneinyourgroup.Showtime有智慧的思想，才会有闪光的语言。HomeworkCorrectyourwritingforgrammar,punctuat
