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1、如何写劝说性建议信【单元写作呈现】MissWanghasreceivedaletterfromXiaoDong.Heisalsoaskingforsomeadvice.ReadthefollowinglettercarefullyandhelpMissWanganswerit.DearMissWang,I’mastudentfromHuzhouSeniorHighSchool.Ihaveaproblem.I’mnotverygoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.AlthoughItrytotalktomyclassmates,Istillfindithardt
2、omakegoodfriendswiththem.SoIfeelquitelonelysometimes.Idowanttochangethesituation,butIdon’tknowhow.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.Yours,XiaoDong【写作分析】本单元的写作要求是根据XiaoDong的一封来信,假借MissWang的口气写一封回信。体裁属于劝说性写作(persuasivewriting)范畴中的“建议信(letterofadvice)”。话题“无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼”是中学生成长过程中经常碰到并感到困惑
3、的问题,题材贴近学生生活,属于开放性的话题,思维空间相对较大,有利于学生自由发挥,运用自己的思维方式去解决问题。这符合书面表达的要求,即能够正确运用英语进行交际。【审题要素】写作时应注意下面几点:1.确定文体:这是一篇应用文,是学生熟悉的书信,写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称:由于是给别人提出建议,所以人称应该以第二人称为主。4.内容要点:①问题介绍;②建议一;③建议二;④建议三;⑤我的愿望。5.注意恰当使用连接词,使各个要点之间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。【思路引导】本题要求写一封回信,谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤:首先,回应来信中提出的问题
4、,并分析原因。其次,针对该问题,提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。IdeasWhy1.toaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikes1.tofindclassmateswiththesameinterests2.tojoinindiscussionsandshowinterestinotherpeople’sideas2.togettoknowdifferentpeopleandletthemseeyouarefriendly3....3....最后,写一两句结束语,如:希望我的建议对你有帮助等等。【语言积累】1.Introduction:I’msorry(tha
5、t)youarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsinmakingfriends.Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou./Hereareafewsuggestions.Ithinkyoucan
6、makeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.2.Ideas&Reasons:First(ly),whynot...?Ifyoudothis,...Secondly,youshould/can...Then/Thatway,...Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaif...Bydoingthis,...Lastbutnotleast(最后但并不是最不重要的)...3.Conclusion:Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Astimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwilllike
7、tomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheabove.Ihopewhat’smentionedabovemightbehelpful...Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you’llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.Ibelieve,withyourdetermination,youcanmanagetoovercomethesedifficulties.【参考范文】DearX
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