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1、高三英语书面表达专项训练(二):安全问题一、典题解析假设你是李华,请就食品卫生问题给某报社英文栏目编辑写一封150词左右的信,内容要点如下:1)你的邻居因食用从市场买回来的伪劣食品中毒;2)你目睹了他们中毒与邻里帮助下脱险的经过;3)呼吁社会各界重视食品卫生(hygiene)与安全;打击牟取暴利的不法商贩。注意信的开头与落款已给出,不计入总词数。Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutafoodpoisoningincident.Severaldaysago,____
2、__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua1.试题解读一审体裁;本文要求写一封信,属于应用文范畴。二审人称和时态:本文是作者李华自己给报社英文栏目编辑写信,因此主要人称为第一人称I。根据文章写作要求,以描述事情经过为主的段落应该使
3、用一般过去时,以呼吁为主的段落就应该使用一般现在时。三审要点:该篇文章要点有二:第一,叙述邻居中毒及脱险的经过,为了写作更加有条理,建议按照事情发生的时间顺序叙述。第二,呼吁社会重视食品卫生与安全,打击不法商贩,并且还要表达自己的愿望。I’mwritingtotellyouabout…Theyhadstomachachesandbroughtupwhattheyhadeaten.Afterseveralhours’treatment,theyfinally…2.写作模板叙述邻居中毒及脱险的经过Fr
4、omthisallofushaverealizedtheimportanceoffoodsafety.呼吁社会重视食品卫生与安全3.可用素材:(1)词汇:Poison/poisoning,fake,havestomachaches,bringup,passby,ambulance,treatment,escape,foodsafety,illegal,makeprofits,intheraceto,careabout,consumer,meanwhile,takeaction/measures…4
5、(2)句式:Anotherneighborpassedbyonlyto…Fromthisallofushaverealized…Meanwhile,Idohopethewholesocietyshall…4.满分作文展示:Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutafoodpoisoningincident.Severaldaysago,myneighborfamilyateabagoffakefoodfromthemarket.Afterthemeal,theyhad
6、stomachachesandbroughtupwhattheyhadstomachachesandbroughtupwhattheyhadeatenastheirfacesturnedpale.Fortunately,anotherneighborpassedbyonlytofindtheaccidentandimmediatelycalledtheambulance,whichcarriedthemquicklytohospital.Afterseveralhours’treatmentthe
7、yfinallyescapedfromdeath.Fromthisallofushaverealizedtheimportanceoffoodsafety.Assomeillegalbusinessmenareonlyinterestedinmakingprofitsintheracetobecomerichquickly,theyseldomcareaboutthenecessarysafetymeasuresandhygieneorcarewhathappenstoconsumers.They
8、mustbechargedbylaw.Meanwhile,Idohopethewholesocietyshallbegintakingactiontoprotectpeople’slifesafety.Yours,LiHua二、范文背诵假如你是李华,你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容:1.安全意识的重要性2.在运动中要注意人生安全3.在校内要注意人身安全4.同学间