漫画作文课件.ppt

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1、Writingbasedonacartoon漫画类作文指导Problems:1.wrongstructures2.improperdescription3.misunderstandingwhatthepictureshowsStepILeadinTasks:1.Todealwithproblemsinwritingbasedonacartoon2.TolearnthebasicstructureofcartoonwritingStepIIAnexampleHowcanwewriteacompositionbasedonacartoon?Writi

2、ng:目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“HealthCare”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。A.Makeanoutlineofthewriting1.漫画内容Writing:目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“HealthCare”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的

3、观点。2.现象→后果3.你的观点1.Description:1.Anoldmanwasinhospitalforhisheartattack.2.Threeweekslater,hepaidhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.3.Thebillwith$5,0000shockedhim.4.Henearlyfellontothefloor.5.Thehighfeewasanotherheartattacktohim.2.Phenomenon:Themedicalfeesareveryhigh.3.Youropinio

4、n(Measures)Consequencespeople:society:government:hospital:2.Phenomenon:Themedicalfeesareveryhigh.Consequencespeople:society:Peoplecan’taffordtheheavymedicalfeesandhavetobearthepainofillness.Itwon’tbebeneficialtothebuildingofourharmonioussociety.3.Youropinion(Measures)governmen

5、t:hospital:Governmentshouldsetupeffectivemedicalsystem.Theyshouldputthebenefitsofthepatientsinthefirstplaceandreducethefee.Wecanseeanoldmanwasinhospitalforhisheartattack.Threeweekslater,hewasaskedtopayhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.Whenhesawthebill,hegotshockedandnearlyfell

6、ontothefloor.Thehighfeewasanotherheartattacktohim.Nowadays,themedicalfeesarehigh.Manypeopleareindebttogetmedicalfees.Somepeoplecan’taffordtheheavymedicalfees.Theyhavetobearthepainofillnesses.Itwon’tbebeneficialtoourharmonioussociety.Ithinkthemedicalexpensesshouldbereduced.Theg

7、overnmentshouldbuildupaneffectivemedicalsystem.Thehospitalshouldputthebenefitsofthepatientsinthefirstplace.B.FormadraftbyjoiningthesentencesWecanseeanoldmanwasinhospitalforhisheartattack.Threeweekslater,hewasaskedtopayhismedicalfeebeforehelefthospital.Whenhesawthebill,hegotsho

8、ckedandnearlyfellontothefloor.Thehighfeewasanotherheartattack