丁 看图书面表达.ppt

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1、书面表达（满分30分）观察下面的一幅漫画，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文.要求：1．短文应包括图示要点；2．说明图示所隐含的现象问题（学习、教育）；3．发表自己的观点和看法.参考词汇：解开（包装纸等）unwrap粽子ZongziIlikereadingWritingwiththeaidofpictures看图写作一、审题&审图typepersontensestructure夹叙夹议(议论类为主)narrationinterspersedwithcommentsPara1Para2Para3thethirdthepresenttense审题:DescribethepictureConclude

2、andanalyzewhatthepictureimplies(暗含)Yourowncommonsonthephenomenon审图:Ilikereading图片文字“如何解开粽子”aboy/studentHeisreadingabooktosearchforasolution所绘场景、气氛Hedoesn’tknowhowtounwraptheZongziWho:What/how:When:Why:Where:aplateofZongzipuzzled/ataloss图片围绕5个“W”1个“H”的主要方面看图Whenheishavingbreakfastathome此篇可忽略学生的审题图存在

3、的问题：ZhuGuangxuan:Howtounwrapzongzi?IthinkeverybodyknowhowtounwrapZongzi.BecauseduanwufestivalisthetraditionfestivalinChina.However,somestudentsdon’tknowhowtounwrapZongzievensearchingthewayinbooks.问题1、对于图画未作描述忌用非正式用语如：Howabout;Let’s…butsearchforthewayinbooksPeiLiqiao：I’maseniorstudent.Althoughthestu

4、dyisverydifficult,Ialsolikereading.Ilikebookslikestory,science.OnedayIfoundabookthatintroducehowtounwraptheZongzi.问题2、人称、时态乱用；东拉西扯其它：Aboywas……；thepictureshowedthat……LiFeifei：Asweallknowthatreadingisagoodwaytoknowmoreknowledgeandsolvedifficultproblems.Butsomepeoplerelyonthebooktodosomeeasythings.Fro

5、mthepicturewecansee……问题3、结构颠倒Pleaseseethepicture……Bythepicture,……Seeingfromthepicture,astudentis……Thepictureissaidthat……问题4：直入图片描述的指导语不规范模句：Fromthepictureabovewecanseethat……Asisshowninthepicture,astudent……Aswecansee,Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,astudentis……Inthecartoon,Thisisacartoonentitled/named“Ili

6、kereading”.二、审中心Ilikereadingdealwithaproblem/practicerelyheavilyonthebookinsteadoftryinghimself1、Theorycomesfrompractice.wecanalsogainknowledgefrompractice.2、Don’tbeabookworm,weshouldleantoapplytheorytopractice3、Thestudentsshoulddevelophands-onability学生归纳的中心偏离Buttheyarepoorabouttraditionalculture.T

7、heyknowhowtoeatZongzi,buttheydon’tknowhowtounwrapthem.Theboyisspoiled/lazy.Heevendoesn’tdohousework.要想在几秒钟之内拿到基准分，书写时请记住：书写认真、字迹清楚、段落明晰排除乱涂乱写、空心句号的陋习三、连词成句读书：1、遣词：近意转换；不会说的绕着说，没把握的换着说bedevotedto;beburiedin;