九年级人物写作专项训练.ppt

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1、初三英语人物描写书面表达专项训练LearntodescribeapersonLearningaims:学习写人的书面表达五步法。复习一些基本词汇和表达。完成相关学习任务。和小组一起互助写作一篇文章。中考英语作文评分标准按六个档次给分：20分：内容基本符合题目要求，语言通顺，上下文连贯，联系实际好，无任何语法错误16-19分：内容基本符合题目要求，联系实际好但是有1-3个语法错误。12-15分：有较多的相关内容，有4-5个语法错误，但是能达意。8-11分：只有部分相关内容，但是有一些语法错误。1-7分：词不达意，错误较多，只有一些与题

2、目相关的单词和短语。0分：只有一些与题目完全无关的单词和短语。人物书面表达五步法审-----审题抓-----抓要点、词汇扩-----扩展成句连-----连句成文改-----修改错误注意：书写要工整，卷面不整洁一定被扣分。词、句与篇的关系WordSentenceParagraphCompositionCP1P2P3P4...S1S2S3S4...w1w2w3w4...书面表达六步法一、审文章主题文章体裁所用人称所用时态人物书面表达五步法书面表达六步法二、抓描写方面主要词汇常用句型人物书面表达五步法apersonothersachiev

3、ementsappearancepersonalityhobbiespersonalinformationWaystodescribeaperson.PersonalInformationSbwasbornin/on+时间2.Sbwasbornin+地点3.Sbistrulytalented.5.Sbisagreat…4.Sbwasvery….Butnow……tall,short,(of)mediumheightheavy,thin,(of)mediumbuildhandsome,cool,beautiful,1.8metersta

4、ll…long/short/curly/straight/blackhairbig/smallnose,roundface…wearglasses…AppearancebehaveOthers:Personalityquietoutgoingseriousfunnycalmwildfriendlyactivesmarttalentedcreativeenergetichard-workingwarm-heartedintelligentgentlehandsomeconfident…HobbiesSblikes…Sblikes…be

5、st./verymuch.Sbloves…Sb’sfavoritesthis…Sbhasstronginterestin…Sbisreallyfondof…Sbenjoysdoingsth.Sb’sloveforsthissogreatthatsbkeepondoingsth.…Achievements1.Asa/an….,she/heisfamousfor…2.She/heisthefirstwoman/mantosucceed.3.Sb’samazing(musical)skillsmakesbpopular.4.She/hei

6、soneofthemost+adj+…5.Sbwroteabookabout…6.Sbwasknownforhis/herabilityattheageof...…Others1.Sb’sfatherdiedwhensbwasyoung.2.Itisveryhard/difficultforsbtodosth.3.Sbdevelopedaseriousillnessandbecameblind/deaf…4.Weshouldhavethesamespiritassb.5.Sbwantedtochallengehimself/hers

7、elfinthefaceofdifficulties.6.Sbmustfacefailure.…Lookatthepicturesandusesomewordsorphrasestodescribetheperson(s)inthepictures.Workwithyourpartners.Task1书面表达六步法三、扩将词汇、短语和句型扩写成句子。人物书面表达五步法Makesentencesbyusingthewordsorphrasesgiven.Examples:girl,tall,help,like,gradesSheisa

8、tallandthingirl.2.Sheiskindandoutgoing.Sheoftenhelpsotherstudentsinneed.3.Shelikessinginganddancing.Shealsolikesplayi