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1、1.句子要正确：1).Doyouknowwhereismyschool?2).Therearemanystudentsenjoy thelessons→Manystudentsenjoythelessons.→Therearemanystudentswho enjoythelessons.→Doyouknowwheremyschoolis?2.句子要平行Inmysparetime,Ienjoypopularmusicandcollectingstamps.→Inmysparetime,Ienjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps.3
2、.句子要连贯Gointothepark.Goforward.Crossthestreet.Turnright.→Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate,walkstraighttillyoucometoastream.Crossthestreamandturnright.4.句子要有逻辑性I’mveryinterestedincomputerandwonfirstprizelastyear.→Iwasveryinterestedincomputerandwonfirstprizelastyear.5.句子要避免过多重复.Iamtalkingalltheti
3、meinmyclass,Ican’thelptalkingandIknowtalkingintheclassisnotagoodhabit.→IamatalkativeboyinmyclassandIknowitisnotagoodhabit.6.句子要避免头重脚轻Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputerarethemainsubjects.→ThemainsubjectsareChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer.7.句子要避免汉式英语Mysparelover
4、sareswimming,skating,collectingstampsandlisteningtopopularmusic.→Inmysparetime,I’mfondofswimming,……→Inmysparetime,myhobbiesareswimming,skating……→Inmysparetime,Ienjoyswimming,skating……有毅力的有能力的热心肠的随和的精力充沛慷慨的聪明的雄心的有吸引力的determinedcapablewarm–heartedeasy–goingenergeticgenerousintelligentambitiousatt
5、ractive/charming健忘的诚实的幽默的勤奋的独立的谨慎的多话的健康的耐心的宽容的forgetfulhonesthumorousdiligentindependentcautioustalkativehealthypatienttolerant严格的谦虚的考虑周到的杰出的乐观的悲观的热情的心不在焉的脾气不好的举止得体的有天赋的strictmodestconsiderateoutstandingoptimisticpessimisticenthusiasticabsent–mindedbad–temperedbehavewellgifted/talentedPractices
6、entences我总是举止得体。李泳不但很有天赋而且很勤奋。陈翔铎是个很有能力的英语课代表。我们的老师都很热情。吴尊很受年轻人的欢迎。我的理想是到中山大学主修音乐。WritingIbehavemyselfwell.LiYongisnotonlygiftedbutalsodiligent.ChenisaverycapableEnglishmonitor.Ourteachersareallenthusiastic.WuZunisverypopularwiththeyoung.MydreamismajoringinmusicatZhongshanUniversity.Self-introd
7、uction&IntroductiontoaPersonwriting（一）人物介绍的写作步骤；概况）age,sex,birth-place,background外貌和性格）appearance,character爱好）hobbies平时事）bigeventsinone’slife(inorderoftime)评价）evaluationorself-evaluation概貌好平评A.概况（尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺)1)Bornin____
