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1、过渡词与段落的连贯性TransitionalWordsandCoherence写文章要讲究连贯性。为了使段落中的文字连贯,文意表达得自然、流畅,我们应特别注意过渡词(transitionalwords)的运用。过渡词是一种关系指引词,其作用是连接上下文,使文章保持连贯、自然、通顺。过渡词可以用于句子与句子之间的连接,还可以用于段落与段落之间的连接。这里,我们只重点讨论过渡词用于句子之间的连接。文章中是否恰当地使用了过渡词,写作的效果可能大不一样。下面是两篇同样内容的文章,一篇较好地使用了过渡词,而另一篇则在该用时没有用。请进行比较:(1)"Noonek
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