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1、Englishwriting—Thewaystoimproveyourwriting中考英语书面表达评分标准1.总体评分原则：要点+语言表达+语篇+词数+卷面；2.内容要点(14分)、应用词汇和语法的准确性(10分)和上下文的语篇连贯性(2分)。3.词数:100词左右,少于80词扣2分。4.如果书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。（卷面不整洁扣2分）书面表达六步法牛刀小试在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得
2、的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。1.审(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork文体:要点:人称:时态:调查报告一般现在时第三人称四个(一个都不能少)范例stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel2.列(list)1._____________peopletravel.2._________peoplestayathome.3.____________________peoplevisitfrie
3、ndsorparents.4._______peoplegotowork.5._______yourvacation!MostSomeAsmallnumberofAfewEnjoy根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhere’stheresult.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Asmallnu
4、mberofpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）3.扩(add)加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhere’stheresult.Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Thensomepeoples
5、tayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsoasmallnumberofpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.4.连(connect)恰当运用关联词使文章结构紧凑,衔接自然Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusylifeduringtheholid
6、ays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.5.改(correct)Andvisitingfriendsorparentsalsomakespeopl
7、erelaxed.saying（谚语）修改词句,美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句,展示自己的语言功底。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusylifeduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohavea
8、goodrest.Andvisitingfriendsorparentsalsomakespeoplerelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJacka
