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1、评讲作文新题型P30作文结构开头总对提示语或图片进行解释阐明观点开门见山一针见血3~4行中间分提出要点解决问题办法结果情绪饱满10~12行结尾总总结观点收获前后呼应感情升华3~4行特别注意作文给分的要点1peoplechoosetolivealow-carbonlife，forthepurposeofreducinggreen-housegases2Asstudents,wehavetheresponsibilitytochangeourlife3washyourclothesbyhand4donottakelifts，takestairs5bringyourownshoppingbag
2、s6gotoschoolonfootorbybicycleDuringrecentyears,thetopicof_______（提出问题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Nodoubtthat_____.Asstudents,wehavetheresponsibilitytochangeourlife.Firstly,_______.Secondly,_______.Thirdly,______.Inaddition,______.Letustakeactionto_____(结论）.Onlyinthisway_________.Withglobalwarmi
3、nggettingworse,morepeoplechoosetolivealow-carbonlifeforthepurposeofreducinggreen-housegases.Asstudents,wehavetheresponsibilitytochangeourlifestyletomaketheworldbetter.Thefollowingaresomesmallthingsthatmayleadtobigimprovementoftheenvironment.Firstly,washyourclothesbyhandinsteadofusingwashingmachin
4、es.Secondly,donottakeliftsunlessitisnecessary.Usingstairsdoesgoodtobothyourhealthandtheenvironment.Thirdly,remembertobringyourownshoppingbagswhenyougotothesupermarket.Lastly,gotoschoolonfootorbybicycle.Busesproducecarbontoo.Letustakeactiontoleadalowcarbonlife.Itmaybealongwaytogobeforewehaveaclean
5、world.Westillcontinuallyfindnewwaystosolvethisproblem.好作文的标准书写清晰明了无填涂结构合情合理审题明确中心突出行文语言流畅准确不是单纯拼凑阅卷老师一目了然句式丰富使用较多的高中阶段学过的单词词组内容积极乐观情感饱满体现个人良好的价值观人生观作文书写传达两种思想：我很认真，我要拿高分五要：干净，整洁，压线，分三段，ghfyIs字母重点注意恰当的大小可以遮丑五不要：添涂，一逗到底，上蹦下蹿，随意，瘦小挤在一起，硕大无比注意：字母要善于辨认，字母之间有间隔单词之间不能隔太开忽大忽小大概一行十一到十三字开头结尾一个单词拼写也不能错开头结尾三
6、到四行不能有语法错误有用的短语ToOne’s+n(delight,disappointment,surprise,relief)TomakemattersworseWhat’smore,what’sworse/inadditionForthepurposeof,withthehopeofFromnow(then)on/sincethenMeanwhile,thereforeAsaconsequence/atlength因此，最终Inaword/insummary/tosumupfortunately/fromwhereIstand，Asamatteroffact/believeitorn
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