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1、雅思强化写作(二)小作文(图表作文)今日内容:1)表格2)柱状图3)巩固写作练习表格静态表格vs.动态表格表格题考查列举数字的能力和方法。通过举一些有代表性的数据来说明问题;横向比较:介绍横向各个数据的区别、变化和趋势;纵向比较:介绍纵向各个数据的区别、变化和趋势;不需要将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值;对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的。CityDateopenedKilometersofroutePassengersperyear(inmillions)London1863394775Paris190019
2、91191Tokyo19271551927WashingtonDC1976126144Kyoto19811145LosAngeles20012850UndergroundRailwaysSystems静态图:各自为战找典型(异常数据,最大最小数据)分类归纳数据(二)构思:清晰的结构1)generalstatement(1~2句)2)detailanalysis(按照分类元素确定主体段个数)3)summary(1~2句)注意:描述和比较相结合概括描述和具体数字描述相结合(三)写作:注意1.时态多用一般现在时或一般过去时2.采用客观表
3、述,避免主观色彩(被动语态的使用)3.层次分明,条理清楚(使用逻辑衔接词和转承短语)Thetableshowssomedetailsaboutundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities,namely,London,Pairs,Tokyo,WashingtonDC,KyotoandLosAngeles.Londonwasthefirstcitythatopenedundergroundrailwayssystemsin1863,whileLosAngelswasthelastonein2001.Asfo
4、rtheotherfourcountries,allofthemopenedtheundergroundrailwaysin1900s.TherouteinLondonisalsothelargest,approximately400kilometers.ThoseofPairs,TokyoandWashingtonDCarebetween100and200kilometers.ThelengthsofundergroundrailwaysareshortinKyotoandLosAngeles(11kilometersand28
5、kilometersrespectively).Tokyowith155kilometersofroutehasthelargestamountofpassengers(1927millions).ItisfollowedbythatofPairs,LondonandWashingtonDC.PassengersinKyotoandLosAngelesaresimilar,around50millions.Inconclusion,theundergroundrailwaysysteminLondonistheoldestandt
6、helongest,whilethatinTokyoservesthelargestnumberofpeople.Bycontrast,KyotoandLosAngeleshavenewandsmallsizesystems.Thetableusesfourbroadeconomicindicatorstoshowthestandardoflivinginfiveselectedcountries.Ascanbeseen,theUSAhadthelargestGNP($13,160)anddailycalorieintake(36
7、53),thelargestlifeexpectancy(74)andthelowestinfantmortalityrate(1.2%).Ontheotherhand,theotherdevelopingcountrieshadacomparativelylowqualityoflife.Amongthefourdevelopingcountries,Egypt,IndonesiaandBoliviaweresimilarintheirrangeofindicators,withtheirGNPonlyaround600doll
8、arsperhead,dailycalorieintakelessthan3000perheadandlifeexpectancyasshortas56,49,50yearsrespectively.Atthesametime,theirinfan