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1、2019-2020年高考英语复习书面表达专练2——第二节)事件描写(DescribingSomethingThatHappened)美文欣赏Ithappenedtobeabeautifulsummerafternoon,andMr.PhillipwastakingawalkinthedowntownareaofParis,capitalofFrance.Whenheturnedtoastreetcorner,heheardthevoiceofalovelyFrenchsingeringfromanearbyrestaurant.Thesweetmusicattractedhim,sohewe
2、ntintotherestauranttohearitbetter.Mr.Phillipsatdownquietlyatatablenearthedoor.Noticingthewaitereover,heorderedaglassofFrenchwine’Thewaiterreturnedwiththeglassofwineandputitonthetable.Mr.Phillipstarteddrinkingthewineslowlyandwatchedtheotherpeopleintherestaurant.Therewerethreecustomerssittingatatable
3、nearhim.HecouldtellbytheiraccentsthatoneofthemwasanAmerican,oneanEnglishmanandthethirdmanwasafunny-lookingstranger.Thepolitewaiterservedeachofthethreemenaglassofbeer.Bychance,eachglasshadaflyinit.Outofcuriosity(好奇心),Mr.Phillipwatchedcarefullywhattheyweregoingtodo.Tohisamusement,hefoundthateachofthe
4、mtookquiteadifferentattitude.TheAmericanpickeduphisglass,tookahardlookatthefly,andthenpouredtheflyandhalfofhisbeeronthefloor.TheEnglishmanlookedintotheglass,noticedtheflyandreachedforaspoon,withwhichhetooktheflyoutofthebeeranddranktherestofit.Andthestrangernoticedtheflyinthebeer,pickeditwithhisfing
5、ers,squeezed(捏紧)itcarefullyinordertosaveeverydropofthebeer,andthendrankitup.这篇228字的短文讲述了一个带有滑稽色彩的小故事,在轻松的一笑之后,我们还应该看到它具有典型的“事件描写”特征:Who--Mr.Phillipandtheotherthree;When---abeautifulsummerafternoon;Where---arestaurantinParis;What---somethingfunny;How---Mr.Phillipwatchedthethreedrinkingbeer.其次,我们应该注意
6、短文中用了基本上不重复的34个动词和8个非谓语动词,使得整个事件动静结合,可读性强。同时,作者在描述三人对同一事件的处理上也各有不同,颇有民族特色。另外,短文的结尾干净利落,出乎意料,令人忍俊不禁的同时又很想知道:第三人是哪国人?推荐背诵文段常用表达法1.写作技巧1)叙述完整5个W(5Ws):Who,What,When,Where,How,(Why)2)描写生动3要点(Vividdescription):Usingdifferentverbs;Usingverbs;Usingproperprepositions.3)写好开头与结尾(Agoodbeginningandagoodending)A
7、goodbeginning---引人入胜Agoodending---回味良久4)时态语态要贴切(Goodtensesandpropervoices)1.表达技巧1)用好过渡词,使文章前后连贯(1)表示时间过程的:now,then,afterwards,fiveminuteslater,soon,beforelong,aftersupper,tothisday,justnow,justthen(2)表示前因后果