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1、Englishwriting2010天津高考作文假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）注意:1.词数120-150；2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：晨曦希望小学ChenxiHopeSchoolDearSirorMadam,IamLiH
2、uafromClassOne,SeniorTwo._______________________________________________YoursSincerely,LiHua审题-----人称:时态:体裁及类型：篇章结构:Part1：Part2：Part3：第一人称一般现在时应用文书信体格式，半开放性提纲类作文personaldesireandunderstandingoftheactivitypersonaladvantageplansfortheactivityKeywords&sentencepattern
3、schoose,coach,helpsbwithsth,bebeneficialto,trainsbinsth,bequalifiedfor,beindependentin…andproficientin…,havetheabilityofdoingsth,stimulatetheirinterestsin…,getsbinterestedin,createagoodlearningenvironmentI’mwritingtoapplyfortheopportunityto…It’sagoodopportunityfor
4、metodo…That’swhyIapplyfor---IhopeyoucanoffertheopportunityI’dappreciateitifyou…Writing20minutes书面表达评分标准（总分30）:书面不洁/字迹潦草，-3词数少于120，-2’要点有无遗漏拼写；标点符号；应用词汇错误(圈出）动词；语法/句子结构错误（横线划出）有适当的连接过渡词，高级词汇，可适当提高1-2’上下文如果优美的表达准确的词句：名词性/定语从句、非谓语动词等，可适当提高2-3’CorrectingDearSirorMadam
5、,I’mLiHuafromClassOne,SeniorTwo.I’mwritingtoapplyfortheopportunitytohelpthestudentsinChenxiHopeSchoolwiththeirEnglish.BecauseIthinkitwillbebeneficialtomeaswellasthestudentsandthesociety.Meanwhile,itcanalsotrainmeinteachingtechniqueandimprovemyEnglish.Iamkind,easy-
6、goingandhavetheabilityofsolvingproblemsbymyself.Besides,IamindependentinlifeandproficientinEnglish.That’swhyIapplyfortheposition.IfIamchosen,Iplantocommunicatewiththestudentsfirsttoknowwhattheyneed.Inaddition,I’lltrytogetthemmoreinterestedinEnglishbytellingstories
7、,singingsongs,playinggamesandsoon.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemetheopportunity.Lookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHuaGoodsentencesforappreciatonIhearyourschoolwillchoosesomeexcellentstudentstocoachthestudentsintheprimaryschoolinEnglish.Iwanttotakepartinthisa
8、ctivity.I’mwritingtoapplytoworkasavolunteertohelpthestudentsinChenxiHopeSchoolwiththeirEnglishInmyview,it’sagoodopportunityformetodosomethingforothersan
