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1、Loveanimals,lovetheworld._______AwritingclassHangzhouZoo地址:杭州虎跑路,西湖之南(tothesouthof)建园时间:1958年1.有种类170多种,如老虎,狮子,熊猫等2.有很多花草树木,因此非常漂亮.3.附近有许多宾馆,可以住宿,离西湖很近4.有许多公交车直达,交通便利.It’sonHupaoRoad.ItistothesouthoftheWestLake..Itwasbuiltin1958.Therearemorethan170kindsofanimals,suchastigers,lions,pandasandsoon.Ther
2、earemanyflowersandtrees.Itisverybeautiful.Therearemanyhotelsnearbytolivein.TheyareneartheWestLake.Itisveryconvenienttogetthere.Alotofbusesgothere.1.覆盖了所有信息点.2.注重文章的开头与结尾，做到开头“开门见山”,收尾“干净利落”。3.注意文章信息的自然过渡,以提升文章的文采，增强文章的可读性。可适当使用一些连词或过渡词。如：and,so,then,but,what’smore,ofcourse,bytheway,ontheotherhand,as
3、youknow,inaddition,asfor..等。4.避免同种句型连续多次使用，可采用变通的方法，用不同的句式表达同一种意思。如何算是一篇好文章ItisonHupaoRoad.ItistothenorthoftheWestLake.Itwasbuiltin1958.Thereare170kindsofanimals,suchastigers,lions,pandasandsoon.Therearemanyflowesandtrees.Itisverybeautiful.Therearemanyhotelsnearbytolivein.TheyareneartheWestLake.Itis
4、veryconvenienttogetthere.Alotofbusesgothere.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutHangzhouZoo.ItliesonHupaoRoad,andistothesouthoftheWestLake.Asamodernzoo,itwasbuiltin1958.Nowtherearemorethan170kindsofanimals,suchastigers,lions,pandasandsoon.Treesandflowersareallaroundthere,soitisverybeautiful.Ifyouwanttosta
5、yinhangzhouforsomedays,thehotelsnearbyareyourbestchoice,whicharenotfarfromtheWestLake.What’smore,alotofbusesgothere,youcantakeanyofthem.Itisveryconvenient.Anyonewhocomesherewillhaveagoodtime!_______________________________Hangzhou.It____onHupaoRoad,___istothesouthoftheWestLake.As__________________,i
6、twasbuiltin1958._____therearemorethan170kindsofanimals,suchastigers,lions,pandasandsoon.Treesandflowersare_____________.___itisverybeautiful.IfyouwanttostayinHangzhouforsomedays,thehotelsnearbyonNanshanRoadare__________________,_____arenotfarfromtheWestLake.___________,alotofbusesgothere,youcantakea
7、nyofthem.Itisveryconvenient._______________________________.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutliesandamodernzooNowallaroundthereSoyourbestchoicewhichWhat’smoreAnyonewhocomesherewillhaveagoodtime1.禁止投食2.不要
