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1、Theargumentthatblablaomitssomeimportantconcernsthatmustbeaddressedtosubstantiatetheargument.Thestatementthatfollowsthedescriptionofblablasimplydescribeswhatblablawilldo.Thisalonedoesnotconstitudealogicalargumentinfavorofblabla,anditcertainlydoesnotprovidesupportorproofofthemainargument.Mos
2、tconspicuously,theargumentdoesnotaddressthecauseoftheproblemofblabla,theuseofblabla,orwhoisinvolvedintheblabla.First,theargumentassumesthatthecauseoftheproblemisthattheA,theB,andtheCareunknown.Inaweakattempttosupportitsclaim,theargumentdescribesblablathatmakesallofthesethingsaccuratelyknow
3、n.ButifthecauseoftheproblemofblablaisthatA,blablawillnotsolvetheproblem.Second,theargumentneveraddressAandhowthiswillaffectblabla’sobjectiveofdoingblabla.IfA,blablawillnotbeavoided.Finally,ifC,theproblemofblablacannotbesolvedbyblabla.Theargumentalsodoesnotaddresswhatwouldhappenintheeventth
4、atD.Becausetheargumentleavesoutseveralkeyissues,itisnotsoundorpersuasive.Ifitincludedtheitemsdiscussedaboveinsteadofsolelyexplainingwhatblablasupposeddoes,theargumentwouldhavebeenmorethoroughandconvincing.开头1、先陈述作者是如何通过某fact来argue了一个conclusion（这步可分为两句，第一句讲作者得出了什么conclusion——inthisargument,
5、theauthormakesaconclusionthat……第二句写第一个fact——tojustifythisconclusion,theauthorpointsoutthat……）2、作者用什么去支持了这个conclusion（第二个fact）3、还有什么其他的fact是couplewith上面的support的（第三个fact）4、指出作者的argument是unconvincing的，有几点criticalflaws。Citingfactsdrawnfromthecolor-filmprocessingindustrythatindicateadownwardtr
6、endinthecostsoffilmprocessingovera24-yearperiod,theauthorarguesthatOlympicFoodswilllikewisebeabletominimizecostsandthusmaximizeprofitsinthefuture.Insupportofthisconclusiontheauthorcitesthegeneralprinciplethat“asorganizationslearnhowtodothingsbetter,theybecomemoreefficient.”Thisprinciple,co
7、upledwiththefactthatOlympicFoodshashad25yearsofexperienceinthefoodprocessingindustryleadstotheauthor’srosyprediction.Althoughtheargumentseemsplausible,itisunconvincingbecauseitsuffersfromtwocriticalflaws.结尾1、总结说作者的argument是不够compelling的2、为了加强结论作者应该提供哪些evidence
