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1、Cause-and-EffectStructureOftentimesyouwillbeaskedforalife-changingexperienceoraboutsomeoneorsomethingthathashadagreatinfluenceonyou.Thisstructureshowsthatyouunderstandandappreciatetheeffectthatotherentitieshavehadonyourdevelopmentandmaturity.Fortheseessays,youwillwanttousethebodypa
2、ragraphstofirstdescribetheinfluenceandthenmoveontohowthathashadaneffectonyou.Youcaneitherdividetheessayintoa“causesection”andan“effectsection”oryoucanmeshthetwotogetherbytakingeachsmalldescriptiononebyoneandexplainingtheeffectithashadonyou.Ifyoudecidetousethisstructure,besurethatyo
3、udon'twriteyourselfoutoftheequation;makethepointthatyouwerethecatalystbetweenthecauseandtheeffect.Thatway,youdemonstratethatyouknowhowtotakeactionandcreatechange.SAMPLEESSAY1:Columbia,Musician(cello)Forsomereason,myparentsfeltthenecessitytoinundatemeatayoungagewithextracurricularac
4、tivities.Afterschool,Iwasalwaysbeingdrivenfromtennistoviolintoswimmingtocellotobaseballtopianotokaratetonearcraziness!Icouldhavebeencalledtheworld’sbusiestkidatthetime.Fromtwooftheactivities,Ihavereapedthemostbenefits.Althoughmycellohasbeenusedlessfrequentlythanmytennisracquet,them
5、usicalinstrumentcreatesthemostmeaningfulideasinmylife.温馨提示：专业的事情，交给专业的机构来完成。10年来，监审留学一直致力于留学文书的写作服务，已经帮助过无数留学生申请到理想的大学，擅长美国，加拿大，英国和澳洲的个人陈述和推荐信写作。如果您有写作方面的需求可以联系QQ：970865017，按时交稿，绝不拖延，再也不用发愁。However,myappreciationforplayingthecellodidnotcomeimmediately.FromthetimeIwasnineyearsoldunt
6、ilIleftforprepschool,IdetestedSunday.Thefirstdayoftheweekwastorturous“celloday”:Ipracticedallmorning,hadalessonduringtheafternoon,andcamehomeintheeveningexhausted.Buttoday,IthankaustereoldProfessor[teacher’sname]forforcingmetolearntheartinmusic.WiththehecticscheduleIhaveyearround,b
7、eingoverwhelmedisnotadifficulttask.Therefore,Iconsiderplayingthecellooneofthemostrewardingaspectsofmylife.Veryfewpeoplehavetheluxuryofbeingabletoabsolutelyenjoyingthemselvesinthemiddleofaworkday.Icanbombaphysicstest,andthenfiveminuteslaterbeinheaven.Totallyrelaxed,Iswaybackandforth
8、totherhythmcreatedbymybowa
