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1、WRITINGINUNIT1Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.ReadtheletterfromXiaoDongtoMissWangonPage7andanswerthetwoquestions:1.What’sXiaoDong’strouble?2.WhydoesXiaoDongwritetheletter?Workwithyourpartnerstomakealistofyourideasandgiveyourreasons.Afterawhile,youwillshowyourworkinclass
2、.Exchangeyourletterwithyourpartners,anddiscusswiththemtoimproveyourwriting.Maybe,thefollowingstandardscanhelpyou.高分作文的要求1.紧扣主题2.要点齐全3.词汇高级4.结构复杂5.衔接紧密6.表达多样7.基本无误8.卷面美观3.词汇高级Whichisbetter?1.周末我们会有很多作业要做。A.Wehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.B.Wehavealotofhomeworktodoatthewe
3、ekend.2.在他的父亲下岗以后，他就没有再上学了。A.Afterhisfatherlosthisjob,hedidn’tattendschool.B.Afterhisfatherlosthisjob,hedidn’tgotoschool.4.结构复杂他回来晚了，使得父亲很生气。Hecamebackhomelate.Itmadehisfatherangry.Hecamebackhomelate,andmadehisfatherangry.Hecamebackhomelate,makinghisfatherangry.Hecamebackhome
4、late,whichmadehisfatherangry.5.衔接紧密（1）表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor,or,aswellas…,and,both…and…。（2）表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore,so,asaresult,astheresultof…，becauseof,dueto…,owingto,thanksto等。（3）表时间顺序的连接词：themoment,assoonas,atfirst,then,later,meanwhile,atthebeginning,inthee
5、nd,beforelong,forthefirst（second…）time,theminute等。（4）表转折关系的连接词：yet,andyet,but,while,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,however,atthesametime（然而）等。（5）表解释说明的连接词：thatis,thatistosay,inotherwords,suchas,forinstance,andsoon,etc.andthelike等。（6）表递进关系的连接词：notonly…but(also),what’smore,what's
6、worse,besides,inaddition,worsestill,moreover,aboveall等。（7）表示总结的连接词：inaword,onthewhole,inshort,briefly,inbrief,tosumup,inall等。.6.表达多样A.多样化的句式；B.多样化的词汇.e.g.喜欢like,love,enjoy,befondof…,beinterestedin…,becrazyabout…8.卷面美观漂亮的书写，合理的布局，整洁的卷面，给人爽心悦目的感觉。HomeworkCopyyourletteronyourexe
7、rcise-booksafterclass.ThanksBye-bye!
