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1、2011写作串讲杭州泰祺杨娜zjuyna@163.com小作文1.考试安排及本次考试分数分布2.评分标准3.写作结构(补充其他小作文模板及句型)1.考试安排及本次考试分数分布小作文：满分10分（写作时间10分钟左右）本次考试评卷松，大部分学生6分？？？灭绝师太级评分？？？最高？？最低？？评卷老师的标准：Step1：挂档！！一档——9分二档——7分三档——5分四档——3分五档——1分老师最喜欢的档位？？？？？空档！！！（无字作文——0分）STEP2：打方向！根据档位调节方向盘控制走向。容易受影响因素：——字数及字迹——拼写及标点符号——语法——逻辑及内容STEP3：

2、赛车？！横向比较，同一批作文中前后学生作文参照（评分人员2分的调节分权利）结果：六月飞雪，比窦娥还冤3分档作文：DearMr.Li:Ihavejustboughtanewcell-phoneinZhejiangHangzhou.Thismynewcell-phonefromyourcompanymade.Ihaveusedthreedaysthatfindtherearesomeproblemswiththecell-phone.Aboveall,thenewcell-phoneskinhavetoomanylittlepoint.Second,thenewcel

3、l-phonemassagesystems.Andimgesystemsiscannottosee.Ihavetolettertoyou,becausemyhaveyourhelps.Pleaselettermehurryup.Thankyouverymuch.Yours,ZhangWei5分档作文DearMr.Li,Iamsorrytowriteyoutocomplaintheproblemofthecell-phoneIboughtfromyourstoreyesterday.Ifinditcan’tworkproperlywhenIpoweritonthism

4、orning,theLCDdisplaysnosignalalthoughIamsuretheSIMcardisinstalledcorrectly.Itisstronglysuspiciousthatthequalityisnotgoodasourexpect,soIfirmlydemandtoreplaceanew-welloneforit.Iwillwaitpatientlyforyouranswerin5days.Hopeyoucallmyalternativecell-phone130….assoonasyoureadmyletter.AndIamlook

5、ingforwardtoyourgoodservice.Manythanksforyourattention.BestRegardsZhangWei7分档作文DearMrLi:Iamherebywritingthislettertomakeacomplaint,asIboughtanewcell-phonefromyourstorejusttwodaysago.Howeve,Ifoundtherearesomeproblemswhichshouldnothappen.Firstofall,themobileshutoffautomaticalyfromtimetot

6、ime.Ihavetotrymanytimestore-turniton.Secondly,therearesomekeysareofnouse.Thirdly,thescreensometimeswentdarkoutofsuddent.Iwouldliketoreturnthiscell-phone,andgetmymoneythatIpaidfor.Pleasekindlyhelpmesolvethisproblematearliest.Yourquickestattentionwillberightlyappreciated.Bestregards.Your

7、szhangwei9分档作文DearMr.Li:Iventuretowritetocomplainaboutthequalityofthecell-phoneIboughtlastFridayatyourstore.Therehasbeenaseriesofproblems.Foronething,thescreenisalwaysblank.Foranother,thebatteryisdistressingasitbarelysupportsthecell-phone’soperationforhalfanhour.Therefore,Iwishtoexch