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1、(一)FirePreventiononCampus1.前段时间校园火灾频发,造成生命和财产损失2.分析火灾发生的原因3.作为学生,如何预防校园火灾发生•审题概述•这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章,撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失,然后说明火灾原因,最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段,主要概述;第二段,说明原因;第三段,详细论述措施。【范文】1FirePreventiononCampusPeoplearealarmedbythesuccessionofcampus
2、firesinrecentyears.Ineachoftheseaccidents,heavycasualtieswerereported-houseswereburneddown,studentslosttheirlives,andpropertiesweredamaged.Facedwithsuchachillingfact,peoplekeepasking,“Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?”Abriefsurveyofthemrevealstha
3、thumanfactorsstillprovetobetheleadingcauses.Forexample,threeofthesefireswerecausedbythestudents,useofelectricwater-heaters4、thercases,fireswerealsocausedbystoves,candles,cigarettebutts,etc。Sincemostofthesedisasterscouldhavebeenpreventedifproperprecautionshadbeentaken,studentsshouldbebettereducatedontheimportaneeandmeasuresoffirecontrol.Thefollowingthreeremindersareofparticulari5、mportanceforusstudents:First,learnhowtouseafireextinguisher^Second,double-checkcandles,heaters,stovesandotherelectricappliances,andmakesuretherearenoopenflamesbeforeleavingrooms-Lastly,donotsmokeinthedorm.◊第一段思路点评:概述并引入下文◊语言点提示:(1)此句Whatonearthresultsinthe6、serepeatedtragedies?常可作为过渡句,引出下文(2)注意描述有关火灾客观事实,多使用被动语态,如arealarmedby,werereported,wereburnedclown,weredamaged,Facedwitho◊第二段思路点评:论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器,还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂,◊语言点提示:electricwater-heaters电热水器◊第三段思路点评:详述预防火灾的三点措施,注意使用连接词语first,second,lastly。◊语言7、点提示:takeprecautions采取预防措施fireextinguisher灭火器(Zl)EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts1.校园盗窃案件时有发生2.物品被盗的原因3.学生如何加强防盗意识•审题概述•这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】1EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts8、Tfyoudon"twanttowakeupandfindyouhavenopantstowear,you"dbetterputthemoninsleep,”goesapopularjokeamongstudents.Obviously,campustheftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoyingastheyoccurfarmoreoftenthanbefore.Anditseemstha
4、thercases,fireswerealsocausedbystoves,candles,cigarettebutts,etc。Sincemostofthesedisasterscouldhavebeenpreventedifproperprecautionshadbeentaken,studentsshouldbebettereducatedontheimportaneeandmeasuresoffirecontrol.Thefollowingthreeremindersareofparticulari
5、mportanceforusstudents:First,learnhowtouseafireextinguisher^Second,double-checkcandles,heaters,stovesandotherelectricappliances,andmakesuretherearenoopenflamesbeforeleavingrooms-Lastly,donotsmokeinthedorm.◊第一段思路点评:概述并引入下文◊语言点提示:(1)此句Whatonearthresultsinthe
6、serepeatedtragedies?常可作为过渡句,引出下文(2)注意描述有关火灾客观事实,多使用被动语态,如arealarmedby,werereported,wereburnedclown,weredamaged,Facedwitho◊第二段思路点评:论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器,还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂,◊语言点提示:electricwater-heaters电热水器◊第三段思路点评:详述预防火灾的三点措施,注意使用连接词语first,second,lastly。◊语言
7、点提示:takeprecautions采取预防措施fireextinguisher灭火器(Zl)EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts1.校园盗窃案件时有发生2.物品被盗的原因3.学生如何加强防盗意识•审题概述•这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】1EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts
8、Tfyoudon"twanttowakeupandfindyouhavenopantstowear,you"dbetterputthemoninsleep,”goesapopularjokeamongstudents.Obviously,campustheftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoyingastheyoccurfarmoreoftenthanbefore.Anditseemstha
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