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1、难点:1.想到简单、好写的内容;2.造出简单、正确的句子;3.升级;4.地道;重点:一、内容要简单a)总结常见内容的套话b)鼓励学生想到简单好写的内容二、结构要清晰a)段落结构b)篇章结构i.书信ii.其它应用文i.提纲议论文ii.提纲记叙文iii.看图议论文iv.看图记叙文v.图表作文二、语言要精彩a)谴词i.换词大法(3种)1.晚学词2.短语3.衍生词ii.添词大法(4种)1.名词前面加多个形容词2.名词后面加同位语1.在“助系情之后,实义动词之前”加副词2.名形动副可并列b)造句i.前面添一添(6个)Itisclearthat…清Itiso
2、bviousthat…明Thereisnodoubtthat…疑Noonecandeny…否Needlesstosay,…不用Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…走ii.后面补一补(18个)“因为,以防,所以,为了,如果,只要,这件事儿”1、…,for…2、…,inthat….3、…,forthereasonthat…4、…,incase….(…,lest)5、…,forfearthat…6、…;therefore…7、…;consequently…8、…;accordingly,..9、…;asaresult,…10、…inorde
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4、tandconsideratemotherwhogavebirthtoyou,hasbroughtyouupandcherishesyouthemostintheworld,sothatyourfamilywouldcertainlybecompletelyfloodedwithendlessharmonyandhappiness,whichisundoubtedlybeneficialforyouhappyandhealthygrowth,inthataharmoniouslivingenvironmentwillnotonlyprovidey
5、ouwithmoreconfidencebutalsomoreencouragement.i.中间变一变(9种)1.变主语a)物b)事Lovingyouisthemeaningofmylife.a)It2.变句式a)Adj、advb)Notc)地点d)强调e)非谓语动词Sue,needlesstosay,Ithankyou.Firstandforemost,thereisnodoubtthatyoutaughtsowellthatallofuscanspeakEnglishnow.Additionally,itisobviousthatwelea
6、rnedalot;consequently,ourconfidencehasbeengreatlyimproved.Lastbutnotleast,noonecandenywehadagreattimetogether,whichwewillkeepinmindforever.高分作文之道英语解密之术遣词造句之法谋篇布局之要LiHuiisateacher(teachingEnglish)(inBeijing)(whichisthecapital)(ofChina).