掌握写作技巧 增添表达亮点

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1、掌握写作技巧增添表达亮点1淘花/百度专用2009年山东省高考英语作文各档次的给分范围和要求第一档（优秀）26分-29分紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，有效使用连接成分，显示出较强的语言运用表达能力；语言小错不超过4个，不能有一处大错。第二档（良好）22分-25分紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达；大错不超过3个。第三档（一般）18分-21分紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。2淘花/百度专用De

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