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1、初中学生英语写作能力的培养施志红2008.507年写作无现成的范文可套ThingsIhatetodoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…三、了解评分标准07作文分标准7+7+2(内容+语言+组织结构)组织结构分1.内容充实,不写废话;上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给2分.组织结构分2.一般情况下,内容和语言在13分以上者(含),方可得到1~2分组织结构分.组织结构分3.内容和语言在12分以下者
2、,如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达,可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分.组织结构分4.通篇句型、句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般亦不予给组织结构分。07作文分析举例Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies.ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking.Asweallknow,smokingisnotonlybadforourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers.Whenevermyfathersmokes,Ifeelrathersick.Besides,itisawasteofmoneytosmoke,Ithink.Wha
3、t’smore,smokingpollutestheair.SoIhatesmokingmost.(A挡)07作文分析举例Suchasthehousework.AlthoughIsometimeshelpmymothertodosomehousework,Ireallyhateit.Idon’tlikewashdishes.Ithinkitisuncomfortablethatyoumustputyourhandsintothecoldwaterandthenwashthedirtydishes.Idon’tlikecleanmyroomaswell.Somyroomisalway
4、sveryuntidy.MymothertoldmethatIwasverylazy.Idon’tthinkso.ButIreallyhatedoinghousework.(B挡)(5+6+0)07作文分析举例SuchasdoingmuchhomeworkandwatchingTV.Everyday,wemustdoalothomeworkanditmustspendalongtimetofinishit.Whenwefinishedit.Itwasalready11o’clockintheevening.SoIhatedoingmuchhomework.Ilovedwatchin
5、gTVwhenIwasachild.IalwayswatchingTVforalongtime.Soitmakesmyeyesbad.That’swhyIhatewatchingTVnow.(C档)(5+5+0)四、培养写作能力1.指出常见问题句型单一东拉西扯时态错误用词不当2.提醒注意事项围绕中心意思连贯学会审题注意文体研究考试3.避免指导缺失光给一个题目没有任何铺垫不考虑学生的学习基础和生活实际4.全面多方指导狠抓听说训练重视基础落实介绍写作技巧丰富训练方法落实作文批改小结一、明确教学目标二、把握变化走向三、了解评分标准四、培养写作能力1.指出常见问题2.明确写作要求3.避免指
6、导缺失4.全面多方指导Thanksforlistening!1-1Mymotherisateacher.Sheis…Sheis…Sheis…Sheis…Ilikeherverymuch.Thisisourschool.Thereis…Thereis…Thereare…Thereare…Ilikeitverymuch.1-2Mymotherisfortyyearsold,butshelooksyoung.Sheisadoctorandherhospitalisnotfarawayfromourhome,soshegoestoworkbybike.Sheworkshardandisal
7、wayskindtoherpatients.Athomeshedoesalotofhouseworkandoftenhelpsmewithmylessons.IthinkmymotheristhebestmotherintheworldandIloveherverymuch.(73词)1-3OurschoolislocatedinthecentreofShanghaiItwasbuiltin1950.Nowthereareabout200teachersand2000
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