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1、Basicwriting江门一模作文讲评杨华新1.Translatethekeywordsandexpressions:1.临近2.面临3.关注4.远离5.电子厂6.团聚7.交通拥挤8.取决于9.把……考虑进去bearoundthecornerbefacedwith3.concern/focus(n.)beconcernedabout/focuson4.befarawayfrom5.electronicplant6.reunite(v.)reunion(n.)gettogether/gather7.busy/heavytraffictrafficjam8.dependon

2、9.take…intoaccount/considerationBasicwriting:模板2：①引出调查、采访内容→②一些人的观点及理由→③另一些人的观点及理由→④你的观点及理由_________madeasurveyon_______________among____________.（或________interviewed____________on_____________）(引出调查、采访内容).___________ofthemthink______________,becausetheyfeellikedoing_____________while___

3、___________wouldliketo…,becausetheybelievethat________________.Besides,_____holdthebeliefthat______to_________therestof_____tendto__________.Frommypointofview/Asforme,_______________because________________(你的观点及理由).百分数的表达方法。10%oneinten/oneoutoftenofthe…25%aquarterofthe…30%aboutonethirdoft

4、he…50%halfofthe...90%amajorityofthe…/mostofthe…注意时态：涉及到“上周三”具体的时间状语，句子要用____________，而调查的结果表示观点看法，必须用___________。一般过去时一般现在时用上各种句型和语法结构,如同位语，定语从句，分词短语，连接词等。范文欣赏WhenSpringFestivaliscoming,goingbackhomefortheSpringFestivalalwaysbecomesthemainissuethatthemigrantworkersaremostconcernedabout.La

5、stWednesday,asurveyconcerningwhethertheywouldgobackhometoenjoy/spendtheSpringFestivalwasconductedamongover100migrantworkersinabigelectronicfactoryfarawayfromthecitycenter.Accordingtothesurvey,about70%ofthemchoosetogobackhomeforthereasonthatnotonlyistheSpringFestivalanimportanttimefortheir

6、familyreunionbutalsotheycanfeelthewarmthfromtheirfamily.However,about20%ofthemchoosetostayinsteadofgoingbackhomeforthereasonsthatitistoodifficulttobuytickets,andthetrafficiscrowded.Besides,therestdon’tmakeanydecision,consideringthedurationoftheholidayandtheweather.WhentheSpringFestivalisa

7、pproaching,goingbackhomeforthefestivalalwaysbecomesanimportantproblemmigrantworkersareconcernedabout.LastWednesdaywecarriedoutasurveyamongoveronehundredmigrantworkersinabigelectronicfactoryfarawayfromthecitycenteraboutwhethertogohometocelebratetheSpringFestival.Acco