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1、英国某知名杂志审稿专家对中国学者投稿的修改意见及解释(中文解释:唐一平)1原文：Anovelstrengtheningprocesswasdevelopedtoimprovehigh-temperaturepropertiesofalumina-basedceramiccorescontainingyttria(氧化钇).Besides,differentparameters,includingreinforcingagent,thenumberoftimesofvacuumimpregnating,wereinvestigated.RevisedAstrengthen
2、ingprocesswasdevelopedtoimprovethehigh-temperaturepropertiesofalumina-basedceramiccorescontainingyttria,anddifferentparameters,suchasfortifier(强化剂),vacuumimpregnatingtimesandre-sinteringtemperaturewereinvestigated.(原文罗嗦,修改后紧凑些)备注：'novel'isanothervalue-judgmentwordthatisinappropriateinasc
3、ientificreport.Novel是新颖,奇异之意,我们许多作者喜欢用这个词,但这个英国学者认为在科学报告中不宜用它.1.原文AndthestrengtheningmechanismwasalsorevealedbyusingX-raydiffractionandelectronspectroscopyanalysis.RevisedAndthestrengtheningmechanismwasrevealedbyusingX-raydiffractionandelectronspectroscopyanalysis.备注：'And'and'also'arebot
4、hredundant.(不要同时用”and’和‘also”)2.原文Currently,therearetwotypesofceramiccores:i.e.,fusedsilica-basedandalumina-basedcores,bothhavebeenusedforcastinghollowturbineblades.Thehigh-temperaturepropertiesoffusedsilica-basedceramiccoresareobtainedbycontrollingtheprecipitatedamountofcristobalite(方英石
5、)intherangeofabout8~16%.RevisedAtpresent,therearetwotypesofceramiccores:fusedsilica-basedandalumina-basedcores,bothofwhichhavebeenusedforfabricatinghollowturbineblades.Thehigh-temperaturepropertiesoffusedsilica-basedceramiccoresareobtainedbycontrollingtheamountofprecipitatedcristobalitei
6、ntherangeofabout8~16%.备注：（1）'i.e.'isredundant.“i.e.”重复多余（2）Both改为bothofwhich（3）theprecipitatedamountofcristobalite改为theamountofprecipitatedcristobalite3.原文Torapidlyobtainsufficientroom-temperatureflexuralstrengthatrelativelowsinteringtemperature,mineralizersareaddedduringslippreparationt
7、oformlowmeltingpointphases,however,whichmayimpairthehigh-temperaturepropertiestosomedegree.RevisedToobtainsufficientroom-temperatureflexuralstrengthatrelativelowsinteringtemperature,mineralizersareaddedduringslippreparationtoformlowmeltingpointphases.Thesemayimpairthehigh
