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1、四、读写任务类——记叙文典例请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Ayoungmanwasslappedinthefaceuntilhebledbecausehedidn’tofferhisseattoawomanwithababyonabusindowntownHangzhou.Laterhewasprovedtobeadisabledperson.Inaseriesofcasesnationwide,weseepeoplebeingbeatenforrefusingtogiveuptheirseatsonpublictransport,whichseemstobeamo
2、ralproblemaboutcorrectbehaviorandself-sacrifice.Peoplewithmoraldeficiency(whodon’tgiveuptheirseatstodeservingpeople)canbecondemned,buttheydon’tdeservetobetreatedwithviolencebecausetheyoffendmoralvaluesbutnotlaws.Incomparison,theattackersbehaveworse.Theattackersregardrelyingonviolenceastheironlychoic
3、eifpeopleignoretheirappealstogiveuptheirseats.Itseemstheystartashoutorafightforthesakeofjustice,butcantheystillthinkoftheirpersonalintentionwhentheycallviolencejustice?This“violentjustice”canconfusemanypeopleandencouragethemtodothesame,especiallywhenweareoverpowered满分作文Thenewsisaboutayoungdisabledma
4、nattackedonabusfornotofferinghisseattoawomanwithababy,whichleadsadebateaboutwhoisrightandwhoiswrong.Iamsoupsetthatinoursocietythewomanwithababyshouldbesoimpolite.Itwaswrongofhertogetherjusticewithviolence,whichwillreallydogreatharmtooursociety.Todayinoursociety,manyotherpeoplelikeherwouldtakeitforgr
5、antedthattheyshouldbeofferedaseatonthecrowdedbus,asthemoralityrequires.However,ifIwereapassengeronthecrowdedbus,Iwouldstandouttotellherthattheyoungmanisalsoinneedofhelpbecauseofhisdisability.Sothereisstillalongwaytogoforustobuildupaharmonioussociety.Inmyopinion,weshouldfightagainsttheviolentjustice阅
6、卷老师点评1.层次分明,结构清晰本篇习作按照三段式:概括文章大意→谈谈自己对这则新闻的看法及感受→对于创建和谐社会自己的一些建议。按照这一顺序展开叙述,不但做到了要点齐全,而且富有层次感。2.高级词汇的使用习作中用到了:dogreatharmto;take...forgranted;standout;inneedof;buildup;fightagainst;civilizedandharmonioussociety等,显示了作者扎实的综合语言运用能byillogicalmood.Ifcruelandrudeactsarerootedinchildren’shearts,societywill
7、neverstepintocivilization.Thepracticeviolatescommonvalues,neithersolvingproblemsnorsafeguardingcivilizedsociety.写作内容1.用约30个词概括短文的要点;2.用约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法,内容包括:(1)读完这则新闻,你有什么感受?(2)假如你是车上的一名乘客,你会怎样做?(3)就
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