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1、EnglishWriting—byFengJinfromDejiangWhodoyouadmiremostinyourfamily?Whathaveyoudoneforyourmother?Haveyouevercookedforyourmother?FreeTalkToday,let’scookfriedriceforourdearestmothers.假如明天是你妈妈的生日,你想为妈妈做一份炒饭,请根据所给内容提示,写一篇你做炒饭的过程。参考词汇:1.friedricecookedmeato
2、ilsaltgreenonions(葱)2.cookcutputfryadd3.carefullyfinely(细微地)slowlylightly要求:1.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;2.书写工整、规范;3.根据所给内容及参考词汇,可适当发挥。Writing【2014年铜仁中考英语作文】Whatstepsdoyoufollowwhendoingwriting?DiscussWritingsteps1.Consideritcarefully4.Formapassage5.Beautifyyour
3、writing3.Listthemainpoints2.DrawupanoutlineStyle(体裁):____________Person(人称):____________Tense(时态):_____________说明文第一人称一般现在时据实描写:适当发挥:炒饭过程炒饭细节、妈妈感受审Consideritcarefully文章结构1.beginning点题,概括全文2.body记述,层次分明3.ending小结,呼应主题构Drawupanoutline构Drawupanoutline把握
4、文章框架结构。开头和结尾的句子要注意简洁、漂亮。Tomorrowismymother’sbirthday.Iwanttomakefriedriceforherinordertoexpressmylove.……NowthefriedriceisreadyBeginningEndingMainBodyTheprocessofcookingfriedrice列Listthemainpoints列Matchthepicturewithitsdescriptioncutsomecookedmeatfine
5、lyputsomeoilinthepanfrythemeatlightlyaddthericeslowlyandfryitforafewsecondsaddsomesaltandgreenonionsFriedriceisready!列Listthemainpointscutsomecookedmeatfinelyputsomeoilinthepanfrythemeatlightlyaddthericeslowlyandfryitforafewsecondsaddsomesaltandgreen
6、onionsFriedriceisready!连FormapassageTomorrowismymother’sbirthday.Iwanttomakefriedriceforher.IamsureIcancookitwell.Nowthefriedriceisready.BeginningEndingMainBodyNowletmeshowyouhowtocookit.First,cutsomecookedmeatfinely.Next,Ineedtoputsomeoilinthepan.Th
7、enfrythemeatlightly.Afterthat,Ineedtoaddthericeslowly.Fryitforafewminutes.Finally,addsomesaltandgreenonions.连Someconjunctions表并列:and,besides,inaddition,what’smore,…表转折:but,yet,however,onthecontrary,…表因果关系:because,so,therefore,asaresult表先后顺序:First,Sec
8、ond,Third,Next,Then,Finally…表时间关系:when,while,after,before,then,…表列举说明:forexample,forinstance,suchas…发表观点:inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,…表总结陈词:ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…美BeautifyyourwritingTomorrowismymother’sbirthday