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1、英语写作常见错误与分析GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo1Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.--whenonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo)主谓不一致GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo2Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.Therearemanywaystoknowsocie
2、ty,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper.句子不完整--在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语贯穿上下文,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo3Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshe
3、wantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid指代不清GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo4Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself.--Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingitourselves.Attheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.--WhenIwasten,mygrandfatherdied.Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessen
4、tial.--Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo5Leaveoutthewordinthatsentencebecauseitistoodifficult.Leaveoutthewordbecauseitistoodifficult.Or:Leaveoutthewordbecausewithitthesentencewouldbetoodifficult.GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-1
5、4Jiangbo6Therearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.--Therearemanywaysforustolearnabouttheoutsideworld.Or:Therearemanywaysthroughwhichwecanbecomeacquaintedwiththeoutsideworld.不间断句子GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo7Theincreasinguseofchemicalobstaclesinagriculturealsom
6、akespollution.Theabusiveuseofchemicalsubstancesinagriculturealsocauses/leadstopollution.措词毛病GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo8Freshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.不连贯GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo9Hurryi
7、ngtotheclassroom,noonewasthere....shesawnobodythere.Returninghomeafterwork,supperwaswaitingforhim,inthekitchen....hesawsupperwaitingforhiminthekitchen.主语不正确GUCASEnglishDepart.Hu2010-1-14Jiangbo10主谓关系Allthepeopleintheroomisenjoyinghisstories.Allthepeopleintheroomareen
8、joyinghisstories.Thenumberofdoctorsareverysmall.Thenumberofdoctorsisverysmall.Anumbero