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1、Helpingothersmakesmehappy.Everyoneneedshelpandifwehelpothers,wemayalsogetsomethingthatisvaluablelikeabeautifulstarwhichshinesinourlife.Whenwehelpourclassmates,wefeelfriendship,whenwehelpsomeoldpeople,wefeelhappy.Ithinkgivingisbetterthanreceiving.Helpingothersishelpingourselves.Forex
2、ample,myteacheraskedmetohelpMikewithhismathmonthsago.AtfirstIfeltalittlenervous,becauseIwasnotthatgoodatmath.Sobeforehelpinghim,Iwentoverthetextbookagainandagain,anddidlotsofexercises.Tomysurprise,somedifficultproblemsthatIcouldn’tunderstandbeforewereworkedoutbymyself.Withmyhelp,Mik
3、emadegreatprogressinmath,too.Afterthat,Irealizethathelpingothersalsodoesgoodtoourselves.Helpingeachothermakestheworldwonderful.Ifwegiveourlovetoeachother,theworldwillbemorewonderfulandnicer.Theworldwillbefilledwithhappiness.Tome,helpingothersisabehaviorthatshowsone’skindnessandpolit
4、eness.Forthisreason,Ioftenhelpothersinmydailylife.HelpingotherswiththeirhomeworkistheeasiestwayIcanthinkabouttooffermyhelp.Whilehelpingothers,patienceisneeded.SoInevergiveupmy“students”onhalfway.Ireallyenjoythesmilesontheirfaceswhentheyeventuallyworktheproblemsoutwithmyhelp.Helpingo
5、thersbringmenotonlyothers’appreciationbutalsothepleasureIachieve.ThisiswhyIenjoytheprocessofhelpingothers.作文:Helpingothersmakesmehappy写好一篇作文必须做到哪些步骤:1.审清作文题目有哪些要求?哪些时态?人称?2.确定文章类型记叙?说明?议论?看图?应用?3.确定文章时态单一?混合?4.头脑风暴发散思维5.写下关键字,词,句主题相关字,词,句,句型6.列出提纲和段落并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接7.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键字词句
6、完成文章8.写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色人称时态单复数一致等运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来使文章更为地道,通顺,纯正。5.写下关键字,词,句主题相关字,词,句,句型:主题相关核心关键字:happiness,kind,daily,wonderful,meaningful,great,chance,overcome,difficulty,provide,support,necessary,主题相关核心关键词:bringhappinesstosb,bekindtoothers,inmydailylife,notonly…butalso,notonlywonderfulb
7、utalsomeaningful,soundsgreat,agreatchanceto…befullof/befilledwithdifficulties,overcomedifficulties,providesbwithsth.,giveenoughsupport,feelgood,bethankfultosb.beintrouble,tryone’sbest,solveproblems,sharesth.withsb.,dosb.afavour,inreturn,主题相关核心关键句:Tome,helpingothersis…(wonderful/mean
8、ingful/great)Inmyop