2018年高考英语二轮复习第三部分写作训练篇专题5短文改错第3讲逻辑类错误练案

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1、专题五短文改错第三讲逻辑类错误0(3真题验证0（2017•全国III）导学号47404083WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,1realizeofhowfasttimeflies・1hadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmu

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5、memoriesofyourhighschooldays.my❶解析：删除of。考查介词。realize后接宾语从句，介词of多余。❷解析：had改为have。考查吋态。由吋问状语"inthepastfewyears”可知，此处强调的是发生在过去的动作对现在的影响，故应用现在完成吋。❸解析：and改为but。考查连词。notonly...butalso...是固定搭配。❹解析：took改为taken。考查语态。photo与take为被动关系，故应用被动语态。take的过去分词是takeno❺解析：become改为beca

6、me。考查动词时态。“我”进入高中第二学年并成为学校音乐俱乐部的新成员这一系列动作发生在过去，所以谓语动词应用becameo❻解析：picture前面加this或者the。考查限定词/冠词。picture作''照片”之意讲时是可数名词，因为上文已提到过这张照片，因此要用定冠词the表特指，或者用this。❼解析：they改为that或which。考查定语从句。things是个名词，后面接了一个定语从句，修饰先行词things,既可以用that也可以用which作关系代词。❽解析：difference改为different

7、o考查形容词。名词kinds前需要形容词来修饰，因此把名词difference改为形容词different。❾解析：late改为latesto考查形近词辨析。结合句意，这里表示收集最新的音乐专辑，故将late改为latesto®解析：your改为my。考查人称指代一致。全文介绍的是“我”的故事，因此这里应该是“我”高中时期的回忆。（2016・全国UI）Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme-Theywerealsothebestandworseyears

8、inmy11fe.Atthefirst,TthoughtTkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn'tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystel1mewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetim