2018高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误靶向训练

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1、专题五短文改错第2讲句法错误和行文逻辑错误[真题演练]Passage1(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself，Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically，andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook，Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusiccl

2、ub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime：carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes，playingpopmusic，andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays

3、.答案：WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself，Irealizehowfasttimeflies.Igrownnotonlyphysically，alsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowas，Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingswereveryimportantinmylifeatt

4、hattime：carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingkindsofcarsandplanes，playingpopmusic，andcollectingthemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofhighschooldays.【语篇解读】　本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了由一张照片引发的作者对高中时光的回忆。71．解析：词法错误。realize“认识到，意识到”，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语

5、。答案：去掉of72．解析：句法错误。由inthepastfewyears可知句子要用现在完成时。答案：had改为have73．解析：行文逻辑错误。notonly...butalso...“不仅……而且……”，连接并列成分。答案：and改为but74．解析：句法错误。被动语态的结构为“be＋及物动词的过去分词”，take的过去分词是taken。答案：took改为taken75．解析：句法错误。句子用了过去时，and连接并列谓语entered和became。答案：become改为became76．解析：词法错误。picture在文中

6、第一句已经出现过，故此处可以加the表示特指；也可加this，表示“在这张照片中”。答案：in后加this/the77．解析：句法错误。things是先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中缺少主语，故引导词用that或which。答案：they改为that/which78．解析：词法错误。形容词修饰名词kinds。答案：difference改为different79．解析：词法错误。thelatestmusicalbums“最新的音乐专辑”。latest“最近的，最新的”。答案：late改为latest80．解析：行文逻辑错误。句意：这张

7、照片常常让我想起我高中时的快乐时光。此处是以作者的口吻写的“我的高中时光”。答案：your改为myPassage2(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohi

8、ssuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomi