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1、7月1日托福写作话题解析及高分范文!先奉上7月1日托福独立写作真题~~Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Competitionbetweenfriendsusuallynegativelyimpactsfriendships.Usespecificdetailsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.朋友类朋友类!这是我们预测里面的话题类别,所以吧,我们的预测有参考性吧~~看这里,这是我们北美考试帮对7月1日考试的预测截图:上次说过不仅给预测,而且还给解析甚至范文,马上实现自己的诺言哈
2、,今天解析和范文就来啦~~呜啦呜啦呜啦~~(掌声在哪里~~嘿嘿)解析:就体裁而言是同意不同意(准没准?准没准?);就话题而言是朋友类。 不过这个朋友类呢,有点难度,是说朋友之间的竞争是否影响友谊。竞争这个话题本身就不太好写,何况还牵涉到朋友之间的竞争,所以就更不好写了。大家可以想自己思考思考,你是同意呢还是不同意呢?如果同意,你的理由是什么?如果不同意,你的理由又是什么?4/4可以从朋友的范畴上去思考,什么是朋友?诚实,互相帮助...那竞争如何去破坏友谊的哪些呢?所以这里就可以用分类的方法去构思了。我同意,竞争损害了朋友之间的诚实和互相帮助,而且更严重的是竞争会让朋
3、友互相诋毁。所以这篇文章的构思就有了。废话不多说,直接上范文(刚写的,新鲜出炉~~我似乎看了热气~~哈哈)范文:Fromancienttimetomoderndays,friendshiphasplayedakeyroleinourdailylife. However,itisunavoidableforfriendstocompeteforastuffinsuchanincreasinginteractiveandconnectingworld,suchasforaschoolorforajob.AsfarasIamconcerned,honestly,compe
4、titiondoeshaveanegativeinfluenceonfriendshipsamonginvolvers,whichwillbeillustratedinthreeaspects.Tobeginwith,competitionwillteachfriendstoconcealsomethingfromeachother.Owingtothefactthatnearlyallofthemdesiretoachievethegoal,competitorswilllietoothersmoreorlesstolowerothers’vigilanceort
5、oconfuserivals.Tobemorespecific,intheprocessofpreparingforatest,testtakers,whoarefriendsandcompetitors,willnottellopponentswhichmaterialissignificantandwhichstagetheyarein;inthepursuitofanadvancedposition,opponents,toalargeextent,willengageinsomethingundertherose,suchastreatingthebosso
6、rbribing voters.Agoodcaseinthispointisthatbeforetakingcollege4/4entranceexamination,oneofmyfriendsalwaysdidnottellmethebooksshehadreadandlearned.Duetocompetition,friendsarenothonestanymorelikebefore.Inaddition,lendingfriends’ahandcannotbeexpectedincompetition.Asanoldsayingsaid,afriendi
7、nneedisafriendindeed.Competition,however,willhindercompanion doothersafavoronthegroundthathelpingfriendsistosetobstaclesorincreasedifficultiesforthemselves.Thatistosay,itismorehazardousforthemtoreachthetarget.Plentyofevidenceinourlifehasprovedit.Twoboyschasingthesamegirldefinitelydon