12月17日托福独立写作高分范文与解析

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1、42月17日托福独立写作高分范文与解析如果给朋友推荐reducelivingexpense的方式：1.找一个室友合租2.不买最新款的手机,buylessfrequently3.Buycheapfoodsandcookhome（不要经常在外面吃）Whichwayyouwillrecommendtoyourfriendandwhy?思路：题目问推荐reducelivingexpense的方式，选找舍友合租。三个分论点：(1)找舍友合租省下的房租费远多于后两种；(2)找舍友合租还可以在其他方面省钱，比如交通拼车啥的;(3)让步，找舍友合租固然会有一些不便，但并不严重。(开头段：背景引

2、入+他人观点+自己观点+过渡句)Duetohighlevelofconsumptions,youngpeoplecanusuallyfindthemselvesstuckinfinancialdeficit.Inthiscase,howtocutdownlivingexpensesobviouslybecomeanimportantproblem・Somesaytheymaychangetheirmobilephoneinamuchlowerfrequencywhileothersproposethattheyaremorewillingtocookbythemselvesin

3、ordertosavemoney.However,Iconsiderrentinganapartmentwitharoommatecanbethebestsolution.Myviewpointisbasedonthefollowingreasonsandexamples.（分论点1:分论点+展开句+论证）Tobeginwith,livingwitharoommatecanhelpussavemuchmoremoneythancuttingdowncostsinbuyingnewelectricdevicesorcookingathome.Theexpenseofhousere

4、ntingishigherthanthemoneyspendingoneatingstufforpurchasingmobilephone.TaketheyoungworkinginShanghaiasanexample.RentingfeesinShanghaicanreach5,000RMBto7000RMBinaverageifyoungpeoplewanttoliveinsomeconvenientdistrictsratherthaninsomeremoteareas.Iftheyfindaroommateandgettherentshared,heorshecans

5、aveatleast2,500RMBpermonth.Whenitcomestosavingmoneybystopbuyingnewmobilephoneorquittingeatingoutside,onemayonlysaveseveralhundredRMBonemonth.Soitwillbemuchmoreeffectiveifonefindaroommatetoreducehisorhercostsonrentingthanoncellphoneorfood.（分论点2:分论点+展开句+论证）Inaddition,livingwithanotherindividua

6、lcannotonlylessonone'sfinancialpressureinrentingfees,butalsosavemoneyinotheraspects.Roommatescansharefurnitureortoolstogether.Forexample,whenIwasjustgraduatefromuniversity,Ichoosetorentwithanothergirl.Whenwebothmovedintoournewapartmentfromourdormitory,thefirstthingweneedtodealw让hwastobuysome

7、necessaryitemssuchascookingpotandsofa,forthehousewerentwasalmostempty—therewereonlytwobedsinit.IfeltveryluckythatIdecidedtolivewithanothergirlratherthanlivingbymyself,becauseIhadnottopayalltheexpensesofbuyingtheseequipmentmyself・Sharingthoseexpendi