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1、今天为大家分享这篇雅思写作范文解析，将从范文段落、结构层次、高分词汇、常用观点等几方面进行全面评析。雅思写作教育类话题：2016年2月13日雅思写作真题Manyparentschoosetoteachtheirchildrenathomeratherthansendingtheirchildrentoschool,doyouthinkthebenefitsofhomeschoolingoutweighitsdrawbacks?提醒考生一定注意审题。这篇题目考生很有可能看到了“在家教孩子”和“送去学
2、校”后就想当然的写成了一段说在家教学，另一段说送学校如何如何，这样就偏题了。题目最后问的实际上是“在家教学的利与弊”，因此我们只需要单单分析“在家教学”就可以了。另外在雅思写作的过程中一定要表明自己的观点，无论是在开头或者结尾，观点一定要明确。论证要有理有据，且论据之间要紧密的同时又有层次感。在词汇和语法上，可以在保证准确性的前提上尽可能的发挥。雅思写作教育类话题高分范文解析：Nowadaysvariouswayshaveemergedforchildrentobeeducated,amongwh
3、ichhomeschoolingbecameoneofthemostpopularchoices.Iamoftheviewthatthelimitationofhomeeducationoverridesitsadvantages.解析：在开头表明态度。非限制性定语从句的运用，emerge，override等动词运用，limitation是对于drawback的替换。Therecanbelittledoubtthatchildrenwhoareexclusivelyeducatedathomeco
4、uldbetaughtinaccordanceoftheiraptitude.Forinstance,parentscanadjusttheirteachingstrategiesbasedonchildren’sacademicperformanceofdifferentsubjects,promotingtheirlearningefficiency.Besides,suchaconvenientmethodalsosavesplentyoftime,whichwouldallowstuden
5、tstolearnmorethanthoseatschool.解析：主体段第一段为让步段，简单的写自己观点的反方观点，通过两个分观点来阐述，分别通过举例，因果来论证。短语inaccordanceoftheiraptitude,副词exclusively,非谓语动词表示结果，定语从句的运用都是亮点。However,thedisadvantageofdomesticlearningcannotbeignored.Aboveall,theinformationreliabilityofparentsis
6、questionable.Unlikequalifiedteachers,mostparentshavenotbeentrainedprofessionallyandthuscannotguaranteetheauthoritativenessofinformation.Hencethepossibilitythatchildrenmaybemisledisconcerned.Also,thoseeducatedathomemightbeincapableofcooperatingwithothe
7、rstudentssincetheyhavenoopportunitiestodogroupassignmentsorinteractwithothers,givingthestressthatteamplayersareinurgentneedinmodernsociety.Lastbutnottheleast,itshouldbenotedthatnetwork,whichisessentialtothedevelopmentofindividuals,isneglectedinthiscas
8、e.Studyingathomecouldgiverisetoisolationfromtheirpeersandlackofexposuretosocialnetworkwillpreventthemfrombecomingthewell-roundedtalentstheycouldhavebeen.解析：主体段第二段为支持的观点，应该着重去写，采用三条论据，并通过对比论证，因果论证，反面论证来支撑主观点。注意绿色字体标注的衔接词，当内容比较多的时候，段落内部要保持层次清晰。小
