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1、简单句不简单 笔者多次参加过高考作文评卷工作,在评卷的过程中,发现许多考生在表达方面用了较多的简单句,句型单调,缺乏连贯,毫无亮点。当然,至于运用什么样的句式,我们建议考生要量力而行。其实,只要考生在平时稍加留意,在熟练掌握简单句的基础上,巧妙地将同位语、介词短语、分词短语等融入其中,不但可以丰富表达,也令内容精彩迭出,从而让简单句不再“简单”。以下是让简单句变“高级”的常用手段: 1.将同位语嵌入简单句中 同位语的功能是对前面的名词或代词进行解释说明。可用同位语来合并两个相关的简单句,让句子结构简单明了。如: LiMingisourmonitor.Hei
2、shelpfulaswellasresponsible. →LiMing,ourmonitor,ishelpfulaswellasresponsible. 同时,含有定语从句的复合句,其实用含有同位语的简单句来表达,更简洁。如: TheotherdayImetTom,whoismyformerclassmate. →TheotherdayImetTom,myformerclassmate. 2.将介词短语巧置简单句句首 Theboyishonestaswellasmodest. →Apartfrombeinghonest,theboyismodest
3、aswell.10 TheychosetogooutshoppingratherthanstayathomewatchingTV. →RatherthanstayathomewatchingTV,theychosetogooutshopping. Wehavesomuchworktocomplete.Wecan’trelaxourselvesthisweekend. →Withsomuchworktocomplete,wecan’trelaxourselvesthisweekend. 3.将分词短语揉入简单句中 Hewaslostinthought.H
4、enearlybumpedintoawallinfrontofhim. →Lostinthought,henearlybumpedintoawallinfrontofhim. Sheburiedherselfinanamusingbook.Shewasunawareofwhatwashappeningaroundher. →Buryingherselfinanamusingbook,shewasunawareofwhatwashappeningaroundher. →Buriedinanamusingbook,shewasunawareofwhatwash
5、appeningaroundher. 4.将形容词(短语)插入简单句中 形容词(短语)置于句首,可以充当原因状语。如: Thespeakerwasnervous.Hewasunabletoutterawordonthe10stage. →Nervous,thespeakerwasunabletoutterawordonthestage. 此外,形容词(短语)还可以充当主语补足语,往往置于句末,用以补充说明主语的状态(注:也有人认为形容词在此充当伴随状语)。如: Theyarrivedhomelate.Theyweretiredandhungry. →
6、Theyarrivedhomelate,tiredandhungry. 5.将插入语融入简单句中 有时,为了强调说话者的态度,可使用插入语。插入语可以是一个短语或句子,位置也比较灵活。如: Withoutdoubt,ourteamisboundtodefeattheirs. She,Isuppose,iskindofshy. You’reoneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool,tobehonestwithyou. 除了上述提到的五种常用的手段外,其实,把简单句进行以下的“改装”,同样可以取得意想不到的效果。 6.
7、换成感叹句 Thegraduationceremonyisprettymemorableandunforgettable. →Howmemorableandunforgettablethegraduationceremonyis! Mr.Wangisanextremelyhard-workingandeasy-goingteacher. →Whatahard-workingandeasy-goingteacherMr.Wangis!10 7.妙用倒装句 Asmallgardenisinfrontofthehouse. →Infrontofthehou
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